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very cute and emotional chapter great keep up the great work can\'t wait to read what happens next so update soon

I\'ll say. The name and word even have the same letter beginning it. Nice chapter. I\'m glad they\'ve made up. Looking forward to the next part. Will Tyson fess up though? Or does Kai find out?

oh, yay, update. ^_^

lovely new chapter, so cute.

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great work, your stories are soooo good. From your plots to your character development, and I have never come acroos someone who can descibe an outfit as well as you, love your descriptive writing style. Keep up the good work.

Let me start by saying that I really enjoy your work, sorry I haven\'t said so before this. And this is shaping up just as good, and I very much look forward to more.

Very good fic you have here!
I\'m liking it so far, goes a bit different from the normal AU fics around here, them being agents and all. Though I\'m a bit surprised, when I read the summary I was expecting Kai to be the thief, he always seemed quite agile in comparison with Tyson. Why does he change is name anyway, some sort of cover-up identity maybe? I\'m curious about what happened to Kai and Takao/Tyson, whatever, how they became lovers and where parted. Tyson\'s reaction seemed a bit excessive, but, he\'s Tyson, I guess that says it all... Tala seems a bit ooc, too friendly for is usual self. He doesn\'t seem to have a big part in the story, or maybe I\'m just getting this feeling from you going too fast. It does look like it\'s going to fast, specially if you are making Rei and other character apear and fall in love, since love is something that takes time. And why the obcession with each other anyway? The casual conversation between Wyatt and Tyson was well done, though a bit descriptive for a normal talk between two people, though I understand you had to explain it like that, but from where I stand, I\'d gotten the impression someone was threatening his family. Or was it Wyatt who had the wrong idea? I\'m curious on who the bad guy is, with Voltaire dead, it doesn\'t leave many beyblade baddies out. And what about the rest of the Demolition Boys, are they showing up? Guess I have to wait and see, no?
Keep up the good job, can\'t wait for more

*takes dranzer statue* danke. ^_^

now, for the chapter. very nice. the speed wasnt that noticable (to me, i dunno what others thought) and i loved Tyson/Takaos speed, and anger! now what the effing ell did kai do to provoke that reaction. *sitting on edge of seat*

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Hey there, Kali. That was a great chapter!! It\'s really getting interesting.
I\'m taking a wild guess in saying that Takao is the thief that Kai and Tala are after.
I wonder what\'s going to happen in the next chapter. Please update soon.
*smiles and bows* Bye for now.

Lady Kirei ^_^

I\'m sure you\'re story is gonna be real good. I love TyKa and this one has a good buzz to it. Whoever would\'ve thought Tyson would be the theif. Hope he doesn\'t get in too much trouble. Looking forward to reading the next part.

one of the decent Beyblade fanfics that i accually want to read at the moment. i was a little worried that this was another shot, elementary writen plot but you pulled it off pretty good so far. update soon, you left an evil cliffy in your wake.

Yueh Kitsune (if i hear \"monsieur\" on more time i will kill someone i swear)