rate_review Reviews

very good chapter i really enjoyed it poor takao/kai how many chapter are there going to be to this its very well writen in my opinon ;p so keep up the great work can\'t wait to read the next chapter so update soon

I love it you have to write more it\'s so mysterious and I can\'t wait to see what Tala does when he gets back because he\'ll be able to smell Tyson and then they\'ll know he\'s the thief. Anyway write more soon I love it

Will can explain everything to Takao? Hurry with the next chapter!

I can\'t wait to see how this one will go. Keep up the good work.

Woohooo
U finally did the sequel :D
Im HAPPY!!!!
OO and I like your story @.@

Good so far. Please continue!!

Hey, what a great idea for a story. This will surely be a good one. I love TyKa pairings. Looking forward to the next part.

I think Tala has two last names - one for the dubbed version and another for the real one. One of them is definitely Ivanov. Good guess. BRILLIANT first chapter. It\'s 6.20am so please excuse me for not picking out little errors or giving a nice long studio-style commentary of what you\'ve so far written. If it can wait till tomorrow.... (teehehee, I have a four day long weekend. Thursday is our teachers\' day to be taught how to teach by the government, and Friday is Show Day... which is a sort of travelling carnival with warehouses and rides and little competitions like judging animals and science fairs and baking stuff. It\'s pretty fun, just the whole atmosphere though because most of the rides are crap)

I\'ll be back sometime to give a nice long review. But I have to admit that Kai still being \"taken\" is just so.... awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

~studio

i\'m really enjoying this fic its really great so keep up the fantastic work and update soon

yay, i was waiting for this

i must say, i thought it would be kai for some reason... 0o misjudged... oh well.

was a bit confused about the wolf thing, but im passing it off and DNA manip. meh

lovely intro chappie. ^_^

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