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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've managed to read 6 chapters in one night, yay. It's really really really good so far and I'd quiet happily sit here and read all of it but I've been up for 21 hours now and if I don't get some sleep I'm gonna look like a zombie. I'll read more tomorrow, it's so good I probably wont move until I've finished it all, thank you for writing such wonderful fan fiction.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o OMG! Ish not the end! I love these secret mission fics! Steamy sex in some parts is o-so-sweet too! TYKA LIVES ON! Everything should be fine from this point on correct? Right?
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright this is a review for ALL the Beyblade stories you have posted up so far. Be prepared it's gonna be big.
Yami FireKali you are the queen of all that is TyKa! I bow and kiss your feet. Don't mind the drool, it could have just been from one of your mind-blowing lemons. Let's tackle one praise at a time shall we?
Your writing style. Perfect. I love it. I absolutely don't mind when you make the POV changes from third person to first. It always works, all the time. Your stories are so eloquent and well put together it kind of makes me sad i'll never be as good of a writer. I can constantly feel the emotions of the characters just from the descriptions you write. The characters are portayed , sometimes not fully in character, but again it just works. The way they get angry, sad and happy makes the story come alive and so much more interesting for me and any other fan to read.
Your originality. So creative. All your stories keep me on my toes. I especially like whenyou put them in an AU storyline. But even canon it's exciting. GOD DAMN it's good either way :) I love how Tyson, Kai and the rest of the gang can go through a completely different storyline and it still feels like they're a team. I love it absolutely love it. Write a book!
Lastly, the lemons. Dear gods the lemons. Hot, ever so hot, they are always new and exciting. When i say exciting I mean salivating. How each and every lemon you write comes out *no pun intented* delicious and different from the last, I will never comprehend. They're sultry, sexy, and defnintely fantastic to read. You make all the fangirls happy. Especially chapter 17 of 'Once A Theif' Tyson and Kai...my favorite. Holy Gods! Anybody got a fan here?! I also like how you interchange who is seme and uke in Tyson's and Kai's lemons. Whoot way to go Kali!
I'd like to thank you for writing so many stories even when you don't get enough reviews as you deserve. Your stories are hilarious, hot and exciting all rolled into one. I will go searching all my life and never, ever find and Beyblade TyKa writer as good as you.
Please, please update soon for Once a Theif and also I'm looking foreward to more thrilling Tyka stories to come. It would be a sin not to write them ^_^ Ja! *Dances away*
Beautifullove348
Yami FireKali you are the queen of all that is TyKa! I bow and kiss your feet. Don't mind the drool, it could have just been from one of your mind-blowing lemons. Let's tackle one praise at a time shall we?
Your writing style. Perfect. I love it. I absolutely don't mind when you make the POV changes from third person to first. It always works, all the time. Your stories are so eloquent and well put together it kind of makes me sad i'll never be as good of a writer. I can constantly feel the emotions of the characters just from the descriptions you write. The characters are portayed , sometimes not fully in character, but again it just works. The way they get angry, sad and happy makes the story come alive and so much more interesting for me and any other fan to read.
Your originality. So creative. All your stories keep me on my toes. I especially like whenyou put them in an AU storyline. But even canon it's exciting. GOD DAMN it's good either way :) I love how Tyson, Kai and the rest of the gang can go through a completely different storyline and it still feels like they're a team. I love it absolutely love it. Write a book!
Lastly, the lemons. Dear gods the lemons. Hot, ever so hot, they are always new and exciting. When i say exciting I mean salivating. How each and every lemon you write comes out *no pun intented* delicious and different from the last, I will never comprehend. They're sultry, sexy, and defnintely fantastic to read. You make all the fangirls happy. Especially chapter 17 of 'Once A Theif' Tyson and Kai...my favorite. Holy Gods! Anybody got a fan here?! I also like how you interchange who is seme and uke in Tyson's and Kai's lemons. Whoot way to go Kali!
I'd like to thank you for writing so many stories even when you don't get enough reviews as you deserve. Your stories are hilarious, hot and exciting all rolled into one. I will go searching all my life and never, ever find and Beyblade TyKa writer as good as you.
Please, please update soon for Once a Theif and also I'm looking foreward to more thrilling Tyka stories to come. It would be a sin not to write them ^_^ Ja! *Dances away*
Beautifullove348
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!! Everything is going great with Takao and Kai and Rei has made an appreance in the story as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!! ttyl
Lady Kirei ^_^
Lady Kirei ^_^
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*_*!! YAY TAKAO!! Oh I forgot to mention, the Tala/Hil stuff is pretty nicely written too... I don't think anyone else could convince me about these two characters like you.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!!!!
I've completely fallen in love with your TyKa!
Please, please, please update soon, I don't think my nerves can bear to wait too long to find out how Taka copes.
Huge hugs for writing and sharing this beautiful piece of fiction!
Hope to see loads more TyKa from you for a long time to come.
Hugs,
kik
I've completely fallen in love with your TyKa!
Please, please, please update soon, I don't think my nerves can bear to wait too long to find out how Taka copes.
Huge hugs for writing and sharing this beautiful piece of fiction!
Hope to see loads more TyKa from you for a long time to come.
Hugs,
kik
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is all I have to say. The last two chapters were really, really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. I don't think that Takao is dying, but he's just really exhausted from all the energy he had to use and he fall unconcious. I hope that Rei will come back into the story at some point before the end. I would like to know how he would react if he was told what was happening with Takao. See ya later.
Lady Kirei ^_^
Lady Kirei ^_^
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay i finished reading chapter 17!!!1 What a hot and marvelous chapter it was, I know i commented over MSN several times but i just gotta say it again! I love your dialogue, it's smooth funny foul and yet seriously tantalizing! I'm a sucker for good Dialogue as I have told you. Ofcourse the fact that Kai was UKE was a biiiig plus for me mwuahaha, you know how i obsess over UKE!kai! *slaps Kai for slapping Takao on the plane*
You wrote a HET lemon!!!! And it was good! Not too mushy just right^^. the way you had hiromi kind of insecure about stuff was really endearing aswell as Tala's softness! *squeels*. That lemon was very sweet and very lovely, you should write more HET lemons in the future! Also the Safe Smex thingie was real awesome!!! You know what I think about that!
So now the confrontation is near, I was spooked reading how Takao held Kai at a distant with elctric shocks to prove he could care for himself. I feel for Takao-kun cuz he has been through alot and it ain't over yet XD
I'm gunna read chapter 18 now, see you in the next review!!
Jen
You wrote a HET lemon!!!! And it was good! Not too mushy just right^^. the way you had hiromi kind of insecure about stuff was really endearing aswell as Tala's softness! *squeels*. That lemon was very sweet and very lovely, you should write more HET lemons in the future! Also the Safe Smex thingie was real awesome!!! You know what I think about that!
So now the confrontation is near, I was spooked reading how Takao held Kai at a distant with elctric shocks to prove he could care for himself. I feel for Takao-kun cuz he has been through alot and it ain't over yet XD
I'm gunna read chapter 18 now, see you in the next review!!
Jen
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o_O!!!!!!! There is one thing that makes me tick.....................it's your EVIL CLIFFIES!!!!!!!! grrr *growls dangerously* But other then that, this chapter kept me on the edge of my seat, litterally.
I loved that security system Takao had, very unique....................and we still do not know whe Gideon now actually is!
You had better not let Takao-kun DIE!!! o_O, i won't be able to cope with that, im serious here!!!!
Damn you and your twists, but that's also what i like most about your fics, you always have an element of surprise in them!!
Watching out for the next chap! DUN FORGET TO EMAIL ME PLS PLS PLS!!
Jen
I loved that security system Takao had, very unique....................and we still do not know whe Gideon now actually is!
You had better not let Takao-kun DIE!!! o_O, i won't be able to cope with that, im serious here!!!!
Damn you and your twists, but that's also what i like most about your fics, you always have an element of surprise in them!!
Watching out for the next chap! DUN FORGET TO EMAIL ME PLS PLS PLS!!
Jen
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HO SHIT... OMG TYKA LEMOOOOONNNN!!!!!! damn I haven't read something that hot in a LOOONG time, heheh I think since the last time you updated ^_^!!! Hahaha lol... omg o.o... Hilary and Tala... I don't think it'll ever beat Hil/Max for me, but that just NEEDED to happen. But now... I totally want more Kenny and Max, I miss them!!