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OMG OMG IS IT THAT BULLY GUY FROM THE 1st STORY!?!??!?!?!??! Just guessing since he got busted because of them? I love this story and you are probably one of the best writers in Beyblade you really get the characters down and I love all the ideas you come up with! glad U updated hope for more soon bye

Hey!
Must say that this is really good
and exciting *smiles*

Please update :D

@_@ YEASH!!! i finished rereading ALL of OAT! Oh damn dude so many letters! *passes out*
*CJ* Get ya act in gear and leave a proper review, you owe Kali that for neglecting and non reviewing this excellent piece of writing! *Twacks Jen over the head*

@_@ uurghhh Who turned the lights off!! ANYWAY! my evil lil yami *Eyes her and her Katana sword warily*, is right! I should be ashamed of myself for letting this gorgous fic slip out under my attention, no matter how busy i may have been because its so frigging awesome! Omg okay where to start.........

I'll start rite back from the beginning, the way you had those little sweet tyka moments woven into the angsty plot was so marvelous. It sure had me on the edge of my seat, both twitching in agony and squeeling like a brainless lil something! XD . Anyways the plotline in this story is really well worked out and the way you combine angst, suspense and romance all into one smooth piece of writing still amazes me!

OMG and now i just finished the latest chapter, i swear i was biting my nails throughout that part where they were sneaking around stealing that Egg. It worked out right?? O_O

I love the TalaXHillary in this. I love the way you have Tala all flirty and brisk XD. So cool and the fact that you make Hillary kind of an pc expert with some mad skillz picked up from Kenny heh he and such thrills me. It's good that that girl gets some good attention in fics dude! Then ofcourse the TYKA is heavenly as always! I love their little moments, all of them and i just know that you will have that first part of the next chap containing a luscious lovely lemon ne??

*CJ* My my stupid Jen, you are such a perv!
*Jen* You ain't nothing better stupid yami! Don't think i didnt see those YAOI anime's dvd's under your bed!
*CJ* "....", i'll shut up now!

Anyways........................I WANT TO READ THE NEXT PART!!!.

Also wow heh heh Kai's father is really pry-ish, isnt he for investigating Takao's past like that. BAD Susume! *hits him*
*Susume* @_@.............what just hit me???O_O

*grins* So Kali-sama, there you have it, i took a genrous chunk of space out of this review box heh heh, but it's worth every letter. You had better keep writing sistah-friend, because you are my biggest inspiration ! Whenever i read a fic by you, it gets me in writing gear! My my...XD I have almost finished typing up the next installment of The Forbidden, i'll let you know when i upload okay?
And now i am off for some well deserved tea and then sleep! XD its 4 27 am already!!?!! O_O

Bye bye!
*huggles*
Jen

Hello! :) I've been following this fic for a while--though I usually forget to review *sweatdrop* It's a very nice fanfiction, though of course, I could be biased because it's TyKa =P There are some minor spelling errors, but nothing too serious ^.^ I hope you'd be able to provide us TyKa fans with more of this lovely fic!

Hahahaha, though I'm still pouty from Hiro/Hitoshi being captured >.<

Keep up the good work! :) The TyKa fandom is slowly 'dying' and I hope that the remaining authors and authoresses would keep on writing! :) *is hit with a wave of guilt for not writing lots of TyKa* Anyhow. Till next time! ^__^

Wow. I mean...no, I meant wow. I've read almost all of your stories over the last year and yet I still can't get over what a fantastic writer you are. Not only are your interpretations of the characters brilliant, but the plotlines you keep coming up with are logical, well written and...wow. I hope you keep writing. It work like yours that keeps me reading fanfiction.
By the way, Kai and Takao are such a hot couple! Thank god you seem to think so too!

I still like it and it's so cute that takao met the mom... but I hope nothing hapens to his real family. I also hope that his condition doesn't get worse

Wow it's getting even more interesting lol, Great chapter!~ Plez try to update soon!

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keep up the good work this is an interesting fic

I can't believe I missed this update ... oh my goodness ... I must say some of it was decidedly too hot for my eyes, but I loved that you got them blissed out regardless. :o)

They're just too perfect. TyKa, your TyKa so totally rule!!!

Thank you for sharing, chum.

I anxiously await your next chap.

Hugs,
noe