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for Once A Thief

by Kali

person Tyson
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOL!!!! hehehe takao told them lol but nothin else has happened between kai and takao lol oh well, i guess i can wait lol but yea update soon please
person Hannah
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOO! Update! And now.........dun dun duuun the suspense is killing me XP And I\'m still trying to figure out who the mastermind in the plot is, so I\'m gonna read it again, and again, and again, and again *rambles on*

What the heck, I\'m gonna reread all of your fics while I\'m at it XP

Great Update! Im loving it very much!!!!
person KaiTakaShipper
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiii omg had ta reread this whole piece of excellent writing cuz ive been mout of it for so long, im really sorry for that!!!!! XD omg wown you keep on amazing me huney!!! I wanna read more, also hope they will help poor Takao!! XD hope kai and Takao work out their *issues* some more XD Update when ya can my friend!!!!!!!!!!
person Lady Kirei
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, Kali! It\'s me again!! Great chapter.
I see that we might have a little Tala/Hillary going on.
I like it. It\'s getting really good. Please update whenever you can.
*smiles and bows* Bye for now.

Lady Kirei ^_^
person Blackrose
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. Wish Kai would grow up and accept that he loves Tyson though. Hope Tyson gets outta there. Update soon please please please. I love this story. Your other story sounds good. I\'ll have to take a look. Looking forward to the next part. Please get the real bad ass in the prison.
person Liah
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW i hope everything works out ok, this is one hell of a story! i kept pushing it aside because i thought it wassomething else, a dif story a started but never really got into, but not i looked again... its amazing! this deffinately wasnt that other story lol! Well i do seriously hope takao gets out of this mess and that he gets his bro and dad bk!
Update soon plz!
I cant wait for the interrogation!
Liah xx
person Icestar
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, yay!! ^__^

new chapter, i like hilary\'s transition to the group, very natural. ^_^

and kai was blushing, aw... cyute.

*thumbs up*
person TechnoRanma
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... AHHHHH WHEN DID YOU UPDATE THIS!?!??!!?!?!?!??! AHH!!!!!! *_*!!!!!!! Kali.. Kali thank you... I\'ve been so needing to know what\'s happened to them in this fic... damn I need to know what\'ll go on next.. I LOVE the idea of super powerful Tyson... And the MUST get the sexy lovin back!!! Soon!!!!! ;_;!!! Love!
person Lady Kirei
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, Kali, it\'s me!! Sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while. I\'ve been busy. I really like this chapter. The part where Takao was freaking out over the needle, it reminded me of a sceen I saw in Sailor Moon S Episode #97 where Ami sitting with Mamoru while tells him that she\'s having doubts about becoming a doctor because all she does is study. Here\'s the part of the conservation where the story reminded me:

Mamoru: \"But that\'s a shame. If it\'s a cute doctor like you, I was thinking that I could bear getting a shot or two.\"
Ami, surpised: \"Mamoru-san, you dislike getting shots?\"
Mamoru: \"I hate it.\"

You may not know this but Mamoru hates needles! *trying to laugh politely but fails and lol* Give me a moment. *calms down after a moment* I\'m okay now. Anyway, I\'m really enjoying \"Once A Thief\" while I\'m waiting for you to update \"Endure\" and besides, it\'s good! Please update soon. *smiles and bows* Bye for now.

Lady Kirei ^_^
person icestar
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! ^_^

heh, scared of needles... luffed kais reasoning. takao\'s very honourable... still a matyr though... >.>

*thumbs up*

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