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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story. The Saiyan bonding is one of the usual plot tricks used in Dragon Ball stories and you executed this trick perfectly. It wasn't over the top or cliche as in some stories. It was instead subtle and just perfectly there, if that makes sense. It's also good to see the beginning of these two as really being something more then animal lust that leads to Trunks's conception. I always believed that something happened between them during that period before the arrival of the Androids and Cell. Love it and I would love to see more stories like this. =)
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet. I\'ve read many of these Vegeta/Bulma get together fics, but very few of them are as sweet and sincere as this one. Good job. Keep up the good work.