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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! XD You updated! And I loved this chapter too!!!
Please add the next chapter ASAP! LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! bye.
Please add the next chapter ASAP! LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! bye.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is really really good! I like it a lot! Be sure to update again soon!!!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey cool update! Mariah is such a bitch lol... and the wholoe \'tiger\', \'phoenix\' convo was funny... i love it... escpecially the moby dick statement LOL
Anyway keep up the good work!
Liah xx
Anyway keep up the good work!
Liah xx
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is one awesome pice of work! I really really really adore your version of Rei!!!!! I can\'t wait to read more! GO YOU!!!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD! Another cliffhanger! AAHH!
Please, please, please update soooooooon!!!!!
This is just sooooo great! =^-^= I love it.
See you the next time! Bye, love ya!
Please, please, please update soooooooon!!!!!
This is just sooooo great! =^-^= I love it.
See you the next time! Bye, love ya!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. *shakes head* I pity the Bladebreakers, in a way. *absent-mindedly hits Mariah with darts* As I said, that chapter was great. I look forward to the next one.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Hope Kai and Ray get outta that place. But how will Tyson and Max meet them when they\'re locked in. Glad Tyson won\'t be an enemy. Hope Mariah grows up. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Also kinda hope Tyson and Max will be paired with other people instead of each other.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! This story is a pleasure to read. I\'m interested in seeing how you continue this wonderful plot.
I can\'t wait to find out why Rei and Kai have a problem with the All Stars team. And I\'ve become somewhat enamoured with the concept of Rei and Tala\'s mother. Does she have a name, and are we going to hear anything about their father? (Blue eyes, black hair right?)
Anyhoo, ignore me if you like and carry on!
I can\'t wait to find out why Rei and Kai have a problem with the All Stars team. And I\'ve become somewhat enamoured with the concept of Rei and Tala\'s mother. Does she have a name, and are we going to hear anything about their father? (Blue eyes, black hair right?)
Anyhoo, ignore me if you like and carry on!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow, reallly nice story!! Loved thid chapter and all the others of course! ^-^
Please update asap!! I\'ll be waiting.
See you next time, bye. Love ya!
Please update asap!! I\'ll be waiting.
See you next time, bye. Love ya!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t believe they both left. Man I wish Tyson would get his ass into gear and join up with Lee and Kevin. I don\'t like it when it looks like he\'s the bad guy. Can\'t anyone put him in a good light for once? Make him more perceptive? Wish he could be a triplet to Tala and Ray. Anyways hope to see the next part out soon.