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March 8, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this pairing an thankful to see an interesting story with them, especially during the ages I like to write with for this pairing. Thank you!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree, please pay no mind to the negative reviews - they need to remember this is Adult Fanfic after all!
Personally, I liked it - it's definitely one of the better stories here, that's for sure. A little weird for my taste, but that's just me! You write very well - I do hope you post more stories :)
Personally, I liked it - it's definitely one of the better stories here, that's for sure. A little weird for my taste, but that's just me! You write very well - I do hope you post more stories :)
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! You wouldn't consider writing more, would you? Pwease?
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked your fic.
I've read the other reviwes and personally I think those negative people can go screw themselves because, frankly, it is good to give constructive critisism but some of you were just plain mean.
I've read suckfics before and this wasn't one of them, it was very well-written. Besides, if you didn't like Vegeta to be a Ped you could've backed off at the sight of the warnings, blockheads. And, honestly, this is AdultFanfiction.net for Christ's sake, you're bound to find odd parings and story plots (ever heard of PWP?).
Anyhow, I really liked it and I think you're a great author (you're no worse than half of the poeple around here). Go ttchaku!
I've read the other reviwes and personally I think those negative people can go screw themselves because, frankly, it is good to give constructive critisism but some of you were just plain mean.
I've read suckfics before and this wasn't one of them, it was very well-written. Besides, if you didn't like Vegeta to be a Ped you could've backed off at the sight of the warnings, blockheads. And, honestly, this is AdultFanfiction.net for Christ's sake, you're bound to find odd parings and story plots (ever heard of PWP?).
Anyhow, I really liked it and I think you're a great author (you're no worse than half of the poeple around here). Go ttchaku!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written and quite entertaining. I look forward to seeing what else your mind can conjure up. :)
Hm, constructive wise: (1) table scene seemed a bit awkward, wouldn't someone have noticed? (2) A few spelling errors here and there.
All in all, nicely done, keep up with the great writing! :)
Hm, constructive wise: (1) table scene seemed a bit awkward, wouldn't someone have noticed? (2) A few spelling errors here and there.
All in all, nicely done, keep up with the great writing! :)
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I like this reading. But i have a final question. Did Vegita loved Gohan in the end. Maybe i have a little trouble about the comprehension of the two words " In view".
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic it is actually very well written.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm yummy sex scene. especially towards the end. i love a good vg/gh story
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style is very good, descriptive. Vegeta\'s dialogue always seemed...off to me. Not the dialogue itself, really... Maybe it seemed out of character for him? But honestly, what fanfiction isn\'t somehow out of character? Anyway, I do like the excuse you gave Vegeta for fucking Gohan--purely lust because he didn\'t want his pregnant wife. But then there were the undertones that it was something else. However, the dinner scene came off as pretty unbelieveable. SOMEOBODY had to notice...O_o
I read your reviews, and I was kinda surprised to see people getting all bent out of shape. I mean, I\'m really not a fan of shota, but it\'s been done before. And I figured if it would be...accepted (not really the word I want) on any site, it would be here. But I guess you can\'t predict people. I for one, don\'t really care, because they\'re not real. I dunno, I can usually let a lot of stuff slide in DBZ (and most other) fics that I may be completely against in real life simply because the characters are all a creation of someone\'s imagination. Too much work to get all bitchy about it, I guess. ^^
So anyway, getting off my soap box now, overall this was a good fic. And I hope you keep writing.
I read your reviews, and I was kinda surprised to see people getting all bent out of shape. I mean, I\'m really not a fan of shota, but it\'s been done before. And I figured if it would be...accepted (not really the word I want) on any site, it would be here. But I guess you can\'t predict people. I for one, don\'t really care, because they\'re not real. I dunno, I can usually let a lot of stuff slide in DBZ (and most other) fics that I may be completely against in real life simply because the characters are all a creation of someone\'s imagination. Too much work to get all bitchy about it, I guess. ^^
So anyway, getting off my soap box now, overall this was a good fic. And I hope you keep writing.
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Look! Vegeta would NOT molest Gohan! And unless all the other characters are deaf and blind, this wouldn\'t happen. You have talent, just don\'t waste it on this crap!