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you stop here you ass damn you keep writing update, update,l update

Wow! I wont more.

Sounds interesting. Continue please!

interesting ;oo
there\'s still some grammar that needs to be checked and yadayadayada. And after every 3 or 5 sentences(or less than so), create a new paragraph, please :) It enables a person to take break in between reading! :D
Press enter after every paragraph too, that makes a story much neater!
And yes-- it\'s always good to stop when you feel the need to take a break- like your hands cramping~~

Peace out, yo. =^__^=

yay you update!...lmaoo ooh Im sooo loving this..it has me laughing and going omgggg...and what is Ed doing going back?? hmmm it is lust..hehe and not the one trying to kill him either..lol I loved that part was too funny..anyhow there was no sex, but thats all good for now...love the mind dialogue going on, too good, and I know your working your way to a sex scene, hmmm wondering if it will be the next one??? one can hope hehe..but I do love plot with my sex scene so this is good, and I cant wait for more, update soon k?? ty ty ty much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

WHAT?!? NO LEMON?!? Lol, oh well it\'s a good, and freakin hilarious story anyway. I really like it so please update again soon, and make sure you keep the humor because humor is part of what makes a story F*ING AWESOME!!! ^_^

ooh ya and what your other reviewer said...humor is SSSOOOO GOOD for a story and Im soo loving your humor so do not stop that k?? I can live with out the sex, but soo loving the humor...ok ok cant I have both?? sex and humor??? *pouts* huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Awwww, they got inturupted. Nuts! XD anyways I cannot wit to see what will happen keep it up.

OMG I love your story. I love it when Ed said \"SUCK ME YOU JERK\" that is classic comedy right there. Keep up the good work, and post the lemon soon please. ^_^

One of the meanest cliffhangers ever! WRITE MORE!