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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. Relax, the words will come to you. Don\'t force them. I look forward to reading more.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg I just soo have to read more...uh oooh Ed said Suck me off Roy..hehe intentional slip?? hmmmm I wonder...hehe would soo love to read more, hope you update soon, ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP! You continued it there!?! O_O NOOOOOOOOOO!!! Anyways hey this is already getting my thirsty attention for the action. Yes that does not make any sense. Heh but I will have to point out a few spelling errors but other then that brilliant! Write more please!!!!!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Okay, well first off, it was toooooooooo short, BUT! I have to say that you got my attention...Hell yeah!!!
Second, I really like your writing style...(Some authors begin with one style and end up finishing the story with another one and It pisses me off!!!*don\'t really know why but it just do so*) Anyway...just keep writing the way you did for the first will ya? It\'s really great!
And Thirdly, as your fic is not a one-shot, I suggest that you work on some plot somehow, I mean, lemon\'s good but, personnaly I\'m not really into \'bing-bang-sensless-fucking-oups-dead-end-the-fic\'s-finished\' (only for one shot and it has to be like FREAKIN AWSOME!!). So in your case, it\'d be fun to read more euh...\'extended\', seing how much I like your style...
Well, this review is pretty much shitty and I\'m sorry for that, but at least it was honest.
I\'m looking forward to read what you have in stores for us in the next chap.
Keep on going and PPLEEEAASEEEE MAKE IT LONGER!!!!!!!!!=^_^=
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki
Okay, well first off, it was toooooooooo short, BUT! I have to say that you got my attention...Hell yeah!!!
Second, I really like your writing style...(Some authors begin with one style and end up finishing the story with another one and It pisses me off!!!*don\'t really know why but it just do so*) Anyway...just keep writing the way you did for the first will ya? It\'s really great!
And Thirdly, as your fic is not a one-shot, I suggest that you work on some plot somehow, I mean, lemon\'s good but, personnaly I\'m not really into \'bing-bang-sensless-fucking-oups-dead-end-the-fic\'s-finished\' (only for one shot and it has to be like FREAKIN AWSOME!!). So in your case, it\'d be fun to read more euh...\'extended\', seing how much I like your style...
Well, this review is pretty much shitty and I\'m sorry for that, but at least it was honest.
I\'m looking forward to read what you have in stores for us in the next chap.
Keep on going and PPLEEEAASEEEE MAKE IT LONGER!!!!!!!!!=^_^=
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki