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for Vegeta\'s First

by hibaakaiko

person vala21
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it, litle dash of angst and a evil Kakkarot. I hope it will be a good ending and I really REALLY hope you will update soon. <3
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story! just please don't let kakarott win! raditz is so kawaii in the story that he can't die!
person SSJ-Lover
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!! you must continue asap!!! i love it, the conflict, the love, the lust!! please update soon!! *jumping with joy*
person Kitty Chan
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what in the name of Sai is Vegeta\'s problem?! I don\'t care how much he is in lust, someone kidnaps him and all he has to do is talk dirty to get him to comply? Vegeta is a fucking slut and and easy lay if he just rolls over for Raditz after he kidnapped him. I don\'t agree wiht that. Vegeta should have done something other than get his ass plowed.
person josephine
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh!!! no raditzu can\'t go to jail!! update soon!
person josephine
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow goku is a bad brother in this fic but neway i still love it! i can\'t wait to see what happens update soon!!
person josephine
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooo chapter 2 is over.....i wanna read more!!!!!!!!!
person bulma90_13
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love vegeta/raditz pairings!! My fav.
dont just leave it like this, though!
you need to continue!
how does vegeta react to his father\'s info!?
more more MORE!
raditz seemed very taken with vegeta, so realistic!
and vegeta\'s first was a good title choice. i\'m horrible at titles.

bulma90_13
person josephine
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to know what happens next!!! I hope this isn\'t a 1 shot because I HAVE to know what happens!!
person Rogue
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch!!! Ow ow ow!

Damn!

That was an awesome story.....hot and sexy and completely entertaining!

But that last sentence! Oh...my....that hurt even me...

Ouch!!!

After all that...and he was just paid to do it! There has to be another part to this!
I\'ve got to see what Vegeta\'s reaction to that will be!

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