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by VelvetMace

person Jewel
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmm.... wonderful fic, perfect for late night reading (glaces at clock) or should I say midnight reading?
Update when you can and keep the good work up with your descriptions!
person Aquastorm
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You almost put every pairing in the fandom and mixed it in a single story...

One word: Smut-tastic. ;)
person kimblygirl
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more archerxkimbly please. that fic was great and all your other ones. i still feel sorry for roy. i hope it has a happy ending.
person Averydisturbedlittleboy
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleas upday! its been forever! and i love this fic! its soooooo good and there have been no new chapi in forever.
person fullmetalyoai
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please write more! I can't wait to see what happens next
person endormathom
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was posted on mi Santa Claus Wish List...Oh,I absolutely ADORE HER WORK.I hope soon can be update this dark tale.Terrible,but I canot take it away from my head...
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing! pleas update! i really loved it.
person angelofdeath47
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re writing is absolutely amazing. I love the entire plot of the story, and it is really exhilerating. Roy\'s such a stubborn jackass. Too much pride, his one fault. If it were me, I\'d know from the first hit that I should just be a good kid and do what I\'m told.
I love how you portray Greed. It\'s much better than what he\'s characterized as in the anime.
I feel deeply sad for all of them, and personally think Greed is greedy, just as he\'s meant to be. Sloth seems much more crueler than how I thought she was. Much harsher toward the boys. Al and Ed are cute together, a relationship I approve of. They look perfect together.
I can\'t wait for the next chapter, and you better write one. I\'m really looking forward to it, so find the time to do it. Keep up the good work.

~ angelofdeath47
person Sarasvati Fautheree
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude or dudette,

i\'ve read the entire 11 chapters in one night and am now horribly addicted, and \'tis all your fault, damnit. Seriously, as soon as you put another chapter up, i will definitely be reading. This is one of the better AU FMA fanfics i\'ve read...engaging, horrifying, turn-on, utterly fascinating. I hate seeing Ed and Mustang in such misery, but this sad sick twisted little part of me is enjoying every reading moment....and i have to know what happens next regardless.
person fullmetalyoai
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! I\'m really starting to like kimbly for some reason. oh well. I have to know what happens next!

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