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by VelvetMace

person fullmetalyoai
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. please post more chapters soon!
person Spark
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i swear to god this is one of the most captivating, sickly beautiful fanfictions i have EVER took the time to read, and i read A LOT of fanfiction. Shit…. This has to be the absolute best FullMetal ff I have ever seen!! Keep up the sexy darkness!!! My god I stayed up till 5 in the morning reading up to what you have up so far!! Please up date asap!! Your driven me nuts!! *yes I know I need to work on containing myself, I’m fully aware I’m crazy!*
person Yersi Fanel
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EP! o.o..... nice plot, really.
person MissB
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I like how you are trying to include every pairing. You don\'t see alot of Hughes/Gracia.

-B
person Drunk_Avril
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. I check daily, and I mean literally every day for updates! EVERYONE should be reading this story!
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell. o_o; This story is absolutely amazing, it\'s one of thsoe stories that hooks you right in the prologue. I was a little wary at first, because. I\'ve never had a problem with AU, but a lot of FMA stories I\'ve read aren\'t all that great. Many are. This is amongst my faveorites now. I was hooked right at the prologue and I could NOT stop reading it until I got to the very end. It was absolutely amazing, and I really really hope Chapter 9 isn\'t the last chapter. It was just.. wow. I can\'t even begin to express in words how much I liked this story. It stays in your head, it\'s there. The sheer personalities of the characters, and how Greed just breaks everyone down.. It\'s wonderful. You did a great job doing it.

All I have to say is please, please more. o_o
person MissB
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Really well done and emotional. I hope that the next chapter comes soon. This is definitely going on my recommended reading.

-B
person Elric Maxwell
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so digging this fic! Poor Roy, getting it until the sun came up... making this chapter from Roy\'s POV was cool, I was wondering from ch. 8 what made him give in a little. The pony tail was a nice touch. (I can just see that in my mind\'s eye *drool*) I hope you\'ll add some more soon! This is getting better and better! EM
person Yersi Fanel
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU!!! continue and soon! God Damn it! now... you know I have never read so much of Roy like that, I personally like more Ed, he have face for it, Roy is too seme xD but hey! your plot is nice, continueeeeeeeee.
person Emma
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*holds breath, waiting anxiously for the next chapter!!!!!!*

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