rate_review Reviews

ohmygod! this is one of the best fics i have ever read! you need to write more! i can\'t wait to see what happens next!

No doubt, one of the most disturbing stories I\'ve read so far. It\'s so well written, that I\'m very intrigued on what will happen next. Good job.

Wow...this story is.....brilliant! *totally awestruck*
I love it, *please* continue!!

Now that was REALLY hot! To put Al on Roy like that, that was great! The sight of a grown man relunctantly giving in to a boy teaching him how to enjoy sex was kinda funny. I wonder what Greed\'s gonna do to poor Roy next! And how Ed will react to taking him. Oh, please update soon! X3 EM

Oh my God! I\'m sorry its already too late, if you even think about stopping with this story, I\'m sorry but I will come after you....somehow...but now seriously. I just love where this is going, I am really lovin\' the way you express a sexually active Sloth and Greed, I\'m sorry that part with Al and Sloth together, that scene had me on the edge and the relationship with the Elric siblings, their seems to be a seed of hatred planted in their tight bond and your making Greed really now how to nurture it. Keep up the goo....oh who am I kidding you\'re awesome just don\'t stop.

Bye-bi

Aww, poor Hughes! Too bad he had to be tortured, but you made it hot just the same. I can\'t wait for more chapters to come out! EM

This is an amazing story. Your manipulation of the characters, the writing stlye, the way you capture such raw emotion without just writing sex is beautiful. This is a higher class of writing than most of the rest of the stories found on sites like these, and I can\'t wait to see the next installment. Keep writing! Please!

More! More! This is getting really good! I can\'t wait to see what Greed\'s gonna do to him...I\'m loving this fic! ^_^ I hope you update some more soon! EM

alrighty! not a bad piece of work here. hehe.. can\'t imagine the outcome thought. i wan more roy/ed!!!!!!!!!!

Velvet Mace-sama please more? I know i saked that not to long ago but i keep looking at the page hopeing to find more. Its like a drug and I am addicted to it. I have to say i love the way you handle Greed and Roy. (though werre he not such an ass i would almost feel sorry for Roy at the moment)