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Alright I will be be a critic and a good reviewer xD. First off I like angst stories as well infact thats all I write, because I can't write realy happy stories for some reason, lol. I don't know. Anyways that was a plus. I loved the story line and the fact that it wasn't completely the DBZ way. Like Pan being goth. However I do think it was slightly rushed, and that can be a problem, BUT I will see past that because I want to know what happens next! I didn't exactly look and see when this story was last updated >.> but oh well. I still want to know, lol.

Also I agreed with your rant about that flamer and cutting. I got your back on that disagreement.

Update soon!!

i love the story...and you hit the nail on the head with cutters, i used to be one...well once a cutter always a cutterthe uge is still there and is hell to fight. and i have several suggestions for songs for Pan's band: "Understanding", "Away From me" "October" "Missing" "Farther away" "Lies" "THe Only one" and "Exodus" All of them by Evanscence and from all her CDs including Origin and Away from home...

Sakura

I'm enjoying your story! Keep it up.
I'd like to see how the Son family changes
back now that Gohan is normail once again.
Plus, there was a promise of a Trunks fling
and the battle of the bands. Keep writing!

I read the first chapter and it was good, but I'm just really not into angst. With that said, I can't correctly review this story since its not a genre that I read on a daily basis. But, the main reason that I'm leaving this review is to say that the review before mine? (Written by someone named Chloe, I believe)It was completely uncalled for. If that person does not like angsty stories than they do not need to read it. Flames are completely useless if the person leaving the flame does not normally read that type of story. And, by the way that Chloe made it sound, she(he?) does not read this type. Anyway, my whole point to this was that you should disregard any and all flames that trash angst stories if that person doesnt like them to begin with. I'm not trying to put Chloe or anyone down, I just think that it's plain rude of someone to do that if its not a genre that they like.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

All I needed to decide this was a teen angst piece of shit was read the summary. You did a VERY good job of summarizing this. Of course it would have been easier had you simply said "Utter shit", but you went to great lengths to warn me how terrible this story is.
Cut the teen angst shit.
It will get you nowhere.
If you are anything like your pathetic representation of Pan, stop now. People like that are pathetic and need to get lives. Am I saying you should pity yourself and think you're a horrible person? No.
I'm saying STFU and live your goddamn life like you love it, because otherwise it's a waste.
You've got a life, don't bitch and moan about it. If something's wrong with it, make it better.

Just finished reading the story so far. Gotta say, it was intresting, and a darker side of Pan one would never think of. Considering it's my first every angst read, I'm gonna look at moreo f ya work =D

Keep it coming!

I really enjoyed this story so far. I like how you made the story your own and made it unique and different from the many stories out there. This Twilight Garden says that you must update soon.

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!

it's all good keep it up your doing great i relly love it