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I can't seem to find chapter 2 of this fic.

Oh never mind. Firewall. Sorry. Great Fic though. I love wolfen Gundam boys. Yummmm.

I love this story. Please update soon. i want to find out what is going to happen next between the pairings.

I enjoyed your story, and I can't wait for the next update ^-^. I'm totally into 1x2, 13x6x5, and 3x4, so your story is like a dream come true XD. I hope you continue with this story.
Um, I'm just kind of curious, and I really, really don't mean to be rude or anything but...are you open to spelling suggestions? Because you kept using the wrong there. The one you want to use is "their", and you missed more, but that was the must obvious mistake. The ones you missed are:
in Chapter One: spins- should be "spines"
cought- should be "caught"
the- should be"they"
seperated- should be "separated"
wishpered- should be"whispered"

in Chapter Two: scearmed > screamed
custumary > customary
egg's > eggs
suasage > sausage
stepd > stepped
him self > himself
suspicions's > suspicions
normail > normal
where > wear
you > your
posseion > passion or possession
slik > slick or silk

in Chapter Three: pluses > pulses
witch > which
ether > either
some where > somewhere

Again, I really don't mean to be rude, I just thought you would like to know. You have some sentence structure errors in the first two chapters as well, but I think I'll stop being a butt-head now :(. And I'm sorry if I appear that way, and I really do enjoy your story, but I really thought you might appreciate someone telling you that you misspelled some stuff. Please correct me if I'm wrong, I won't do it again. Well bye now...KEEP WRITING!!!!

i love this story i cant wait till you post the next chapters i love that heero and the guys are werewolfes looking for their mates keep up the good writing.

seems good ..keep going...keep it up

looks promising, and i\'d love to see more of the story! ...though that last little phrase in the prologue i\'m not sure what it is...i don\'t know much japanese ^^...

mmmmm, please continue. I see so many wonderful possibilities! I can\'t wait to read more.

Ninmu Ryoukai if I remeber is mission accepted.

Mmm ... not bad.

Wahh!! I love your idea!! Don\'t get discourage about needing a beta (those things are easy to fix) or not! If your story has prefect grammar and etc, but sucks, it\'ll still suck. So the important thing is to come up with good story lines (which you did!!! ^_^) than if you want to go for a beta ... Anyways, just want to say pleaseeee updateee!! I love this chapter and can\'t wait to find out who the other two wolves are.