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for My Mate

by icekitsune

person Lady_Frisselle
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a good start here. I would like more details but I\'m annoying like that... :) Anyway I want to see where you are going with this so please update soon.
person Alex
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very promising beginning. I have a couple of suggestions to make (and you can tell me to shove it) your work better. One, try using the writing program that comes with your systems, i.e. Microsoft Word or whatever. Two, don\'t be afraid to ask for a beta. The site offers betas and they will help you tighten your work up, correct any problems with spelling, grammer, word usage, ect.

I really have enjoyed the beginning and can\'t wait to see where you\'ll take us next.

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