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by ZaliaChimera

schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I keep coming back to it, it's even bookmarked now. Pleeease write a sequel. I beg of you.
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE write another chapter this is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!
person ursweetheartles
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH *explodes from utter hottness*
at first glance i was thinking it looked too short to have all those warnings but it was pretty damn perfect.
now i have to go take a cold shower...
person Wow
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just... wow. I don't like Al and I can't see him seme... but this is well-written so, yeah. Creepy yet appreciated.
person Yashi
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought I'd thought of everything when it came to FMA fanfiction... but this was new. I thought I would hate this because Al being seme is just weird, but this was actually really good! Looking forward to more of your works.
person Kat
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'d like to say that was distrurbing.

... but I can\'t lie to myself and you\'re far to fantastic to be insulted by a reader! ^_^ WOW! Dark and Sadistic!Al was great! And the ending was just perfect!
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was a nice new twist! Evil Al. I liked it. ;] And I liked how submissive Roy was made to be...have you considered making a story based on this that would let us know exactly how Roy got caught up in all this? I\'d love to read that as well.

Anyway, good job.
person joy
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF?
person Lady Sinistra (Too lazy to sign in)
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... How wonderfully sadistic & dark. I love it. I cannot wait to see more!
person ShadowYami
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! ZALIA! Remember me? ^_^ Its me, the rabid Smutbunny-dragon of Amecon and fellow S.M.O.B-er!

Yay! Seme!Alphonse, how very, very...delicious. *purr* I do so love to see good fics where the ukes get to play turnabout. And Al is just sucha great character, so its about time he got some booty.

Sugar-High Envy Muse: WE WANT DOMINATING AL! NOW!

Down, boy. Hope to see even more of your writing in here in the future. Great stuff, keep it up!

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