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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eeeek! i loved it! good job! arigato!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it. there aren't enough roy/riza fics damnit!!!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it all...thats me!
That was really good...PRICELESS!
That was really good...PRICELESS!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! I loved it!
Rock on!!!!
Rock on!!!!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god~ that was GOOD~ it\'s so hard to find good roy/riza lemons out there... v.v I love you. xD
~evil-chan
~evil-chan
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I worship you. I really do. You have done what many have not. A good fic (A little lacking in the plot but that\'s not a problem to me) and a tasteful lemon. No vast amounts of body fluids, no anatomy confusions or a disregard thereof. Just a good sex scene. And the way you wrote it had some purpose. It wasn\'t just a \"Oh I\'m bored, fuck me!\" scenario. It has something more.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have 2 say that was pretty good
but u could have added more things happenin during their time in that closet
and u couldve added another chapter 2 extend it
so if u thinkin of continuin this lemon i would say
GO FOR IT
but u could have added more things happenin during their time in that closet
and u couldve added another chapter 2 extend it
so if u thinkin of continuin this lemon i would say
GO FOR IT
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! was that really your first lemon? Well i think that it was a pretty good story though i think that Riza sed \"sir\" too much, but i think other than that the characters seemed to all be in character. I was supriesed when i went to your author\'s page to find only this story is there. i would\'ve expected you to have more stories than that well i hope that you post more soon.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thank you for doing my challenge. It was very good. I\'m just happy to find good Roy/Riza fan fiction amongst all the Yaoi this site has. Other than a few spelling errors it was great. And you kept up with the characters\' personalities. Once again, good job.