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by Chiruken

person Nay
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write your story, I\'m aching to read it! By the way, I hope your mom is on the verge of recovery
person Nay
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great so far, and I\'m sorry to hear that your mom is in the hospital. I\'m a huge envy fan, and I am so happy that you decided to write a story with Envy/Ed. I like how you have Envy act affection towards Edward. You don\'t really think that he would appear that way, but you did a good job keeping everyone in character. I\'d love to read more of this story, and I find no errors or flaws whatsoever. Keep going.
nadine
person Nay
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great so far, and I\'m sorry to hear that your mom is in the hospital. I\'m a huge envy fan, and I am so happy that you decided to write a story with Envy/Ed. I like how you have Envy act affection towards Edward. You don\'t really think that he would appear that way, but you did a good job keeping everyone in character. I\'d love to read more of this story, and I find no errors or flaws whatsoever. Keep going.
nadine
person lain
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sits back and has a rather fantastic laugh* Phew. This... this is amazing. I simply would love to read more. Envy/Ed is such a fantastic ship.
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, that was certainly an entertaining experience. i wish i could have seen mustang\'s face. ^_^ i hope your mom feels better soon. just update whenever you can, don\'t rush it. we dont want you burning out.
person Yersi Fanel
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really wis you to continue
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arrrgh! Why are you not writing? This is so good.... Please, update.
person Cassie
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, talent! Heh, you have a beautiful way with words, and you have a very extensive vocabulary which is shown in your work. One of the best I think I\'ve ever read. I hope you keep up the wonderful work, because I am looking foreword to reading it.
person thooruchan
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I\'ve already reviewed, but...
I love you SO much! I could\'nt think I would enjoy so much this story
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*steeples fingers & cackles evily* Yes, Ed. Give in to Envy\'s demands. You cannot resist the smexiness that is Envy! Mwahahahahah! *coughs* Ok, random moment of madness, done. Envy\'s methods of persuasion is too good. talk nice for a bit, use some playful touches (along with a couple of rough ones), offer protection to close family members and top it off with a simple brush of those sinful lips against your own... *shudders then shakes head* Poor Ed never stood a chance. More please? ^__^

*waves banner saying \"Envy luvers unite!!\"*

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