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very hot!...why am i craving donuts now? hmm....

Hello Doctor! Wow, this is a sexy fic. Damn, I think I was drooling when I read this.....

Oh my goodness...*starts giggling uncontrollably* That was awesome! I\'m never going to be able to look a jelly doughnut in the face again...Cheers!
~T-chan

nice play on words in there! very hot stuff. me like

heh. I think me thermostat needs checking too :P peace V

They should have screwed the jelly dounut hole!

this is one of the first gundam wing stories i\'ve read, and wow. your writing is just great. everything moves along so smoothly, from the first witty barb exchanged between duo and heero, to their tryst on the hood, and to their parting comments. everything is just so hot. the sexual innuendos thrown in with the car lingo was just so awesome. i can honestly say, though, that i didn\'t have half a mind as to what the hell you were actually referring to (i suck at anything and everything mechanical), but what i did pick up on was the meanings underneath. hot, hot, hot!!! i know this isn\'t a decent review, and you so deserve one way better than this, but just know that this story is just fucking awesome. short, sweet, a whole lot of sexy, and a dash of funny too. what more could you ask for?

I love these little pwp\'s you do. They are always fun to read.