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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that was such an amazing story! Some spelling errors and words being askewed but bloody brilliant nonetheless! I absolutely loved it, 10/10
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, sometimes I think the American anime has made Vegeta out to be more of a beast than he really is. Wonderful chapter though!
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yamcha scares me! Sorry, I think Goku would have kicked his a** or Vegeta would of. Besides that, nice and steamy, wondering what that bastard Yamcha is up to!
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope Bulma isn't going to be a total bitch and just try and manipulate him. On to the next chappie!
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I guess I would just say the morning after pill wouldn't be "killing" any baby, but that's my only complaint...good chapter as usual!
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Goku said he could remain on Earth and alive as long as he didn't kill. I can't see this happening without repercussions...hmmm. Someone would have sensed his bloodlust, but interesting twist nonetheless, but not without all the angles covered.
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think he was in character. The American version (if that's what you watched) makes Vegeta seem more unfeeling than he completely is and hides some of the playfulness etc. that blossoms between Vegeta and Bulma where you could really understand how they got together. Overall, bravo dearie
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it, when is the next chap coming out?
and vegeta's character on this one was just fine!
and vegeta's character on this one was just fine!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was cute. XD That was some pretty hot sex, not gonna lie. ;D Usually I give up on Vegeta/Bulma fanfiction after the first chapter of completely unbelievable OOC, but I really enjoyed your story! =D It was very true to their characters, I thought, and made for a very lemony-delicious read ;P Thanks!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Leave the chapter the way it is. It frames the torment vs. inkling of caring Vegeta's beginning to realize perfectly. It's not mushy, he's still as stubborn as ever. More please.