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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was a truly wonderful story. Vegeta was not OOC and you did your best to stick with character attitudes , yet develop a loving plot. Im very confused about his t ail however. i never did understand why when his tail was cut it never grew back, but Goku's had to be removed very specialy. eh oh well. I cant wait to read the next chapter, if there is one. i hope so ^^
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is so great! I have always loved Vegeta... not as much as Piccolo but..(LOL) This is a wonderful and quite believable tale and one that I will enjoy following! Please continue!
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG! This was amazing! I loved it! Vegeta was PERFECT! He wasnt OOC at all! I just...wow...seriously...wow! I'm almost at a loss for words. There were a few spelling errors but the story was just wonderful. (You spelled Vow, wow. That's one error I remember.)
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS ONE OF THE BEST A MUST READ!
I really love the story, but please add more this can not be the end it is just too sad. B/V must find a way back to each other he must knoew of his son, and they need to find happyness within each other. Matbe the people he kill could be wish back so how by the dragonball cause I know he can not just get a way with killing like he did, or may be this could be some kind of a dream one of them are having, but what ever you do PLEASE PLEASE write more to this and PLEASE let B/V find happyness within each other.
Thank you,
Racheal
of Brooklyn
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good , I can't Vegeta did that ! I like perspective of both of them , that's very rare to find days. Please update soon!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!, but please make a happy ending.. it can be angst and ver dramatic alright but pleeaaassseee make them end up together! for my mental health. *Kaoru begs with watery puppy eyes*
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Been waiting like forever, thank you for uodating it. The chapter was great.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, the way you played their emotions was fantastic. Bulma rejecting Vegeta, vegeta going to his killer self... it was so good. Hope you can update soon.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, i absolutely loved it im addicted. please update soon no matter how long it takes just that you get aroud to it.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Please update soon.