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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please add another chapter! This is a really good story!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Please continue with more juicy chapters.
Great storyline, and love scenes. What will Yamcha think about this new relationship? I have to know!!!!!
Great storyline, and love scenes. What will Yamcha think about this new relationship? I have to know!!!!!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! great fic!! please continue!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very hot chapter. and now the baby :) lol update soon.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story!! I loved this chapter because Vegeta was kind of gentle with Bulma without being OOC ! Good job there because a lot of writers forget that he's actually a killer not some soft dumb minded little earthling!
I have a question though. Is Vegetas heat already over when Bulma gets tu know that she's pregnant?
I have a question though. Is Vegetas heat already over when Bulma gets tu know that she's pregnant?
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good, can't wait until Yamcha and Vegeta face off w00t! I hope Vegeta gets a bit more caring though, ne?
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! I HOPE U UPDATE SOON!!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome lemons you\'ve got going on here, and I love the way you portray the characters, you do it very well. Can\'t wait to read more of this passionate story!
-kinoko
-kinoko
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn that was a great second chapter!! You stated in that you were testing out your writing skills on this fanfic so I have to say that you\'re doing a great, great job!!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THAT WAS SOOOO F*CKING HOT. BUT I\'M SORRY TO HAVE YAMCHA HIT HER LIKE THAT OH HELL NO. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT VEGETA IS GOING TO DO TO YAMCHE FOR HITTING HER.:)