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LOL Bryan and Kevin!!!!!!! LOL i cannot imagine them two together LOL so amusing... anyway at least things are looking up for Max yey!
update soon please.
Liah xx

Hahaha, bryan flirting with kevin! cool !!!

Ah man I was just gonna suggest a threesome. I dunno who to choose. I like the thought of Bryan and Max as Bryan could kick Kai\'s head in if he doesn anything bad to Max again, but then I think of Max and Kevin. Kevin could sort Ray out as well. Man I\'m stuck. Great story though. I guess whichever pairing you go for will be alright with me. I wish they could threesome though. Or bring Tal into the picture for one of them.

Bryan/Max! Then make Ian pop up out of nowhere and make him ask Kevin out and- ignore me..... ^^;

Very nice! Though Bryan was kinda scary while \'talking\' to Kev... Oh and I love the protective granma sentence, well done! Update soon please so I can reveiw again! ^_^

I love this! I hope you update soon! Poor Max....though I am a Kai fangirl, I do believe that Kai deserved to be punched.

awwwwwwwwwwwwww bless poor Maxie!!!! get him with Bry instead mwhaha - thats if that WAS really Bry? hn?

Liah xx

They\'re all so mean to Max... Why? TELL ME!!! *cough*

Right... Update soon, can\'t wait for Bryan to get in there... ^_^ And this is a great fic...

Well, the chapters are short, but you have a great story line ^^ i\'m liking it! Can\'t wait for more. I like this angsty side of Max too, but Kai\'s so mean! That bastard, doing that to poor Max ;_; . I am really liking your writing style too, nice and descriptive but not boringly so. Keep up the good work! I\'d like to see you make the chapters a little bit longer though :/. With short ones, right when you get into the chapter it stops >_<. But again, update soon ^^
ja ne.

p.s: Oh, one thing, the end of chapter four? Did the site cut off the rest or something? It seemed like Rei\'s dialog was cut off, unless you ment to do that?

God Damn! That is the second time this damn site has cut off my reviews! ... But the rest was... *add an eye to my face* But again, up date soon ^^.
Ja ne.
p.s: The end of chapter four? Did the site cut it off or something? It seemed like Rei\'s dialog was cut off randomly. Unless you ment do do that? THERE! Now my reveiw is finished! *curses AFF\'s random glitches*

Ooooo! Is this Max/Bryan!? Anyway... I\'m loving this! Update soon... And they should meet... Well... That\'s my opinion...