rate_review Reviews

I like it. And I actually rather wish you had kept it all together, because I'm one of those people who likes to read long-chaptered fanfics. My friend Kitty is another. She loves the hell out of my Naruto fic, Demented, because every chapter I've written is between 13 and 30 pages long in TNR font, size 12. Plus, it doesn't torture her eyes to be reading my grammar, punctuation, and spelling, because I'm an odd person and have been good with all of that since before I was seven. That was mainly because my grandma and I memorized a novel called At The Back Of The North Wind. We used to read it together by memory, switching off randomly or by paragraphs, mostly. So I know how to recognize good spelling, punctuation, and grammar. It's second nature to me.
You have a well put together fic. Good spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Catches the reader's interest quickly and holds it. Any story that has that is well worth reading.

*angry noises* You can't just end things there. Well actually you can because you apparently did. Still, this isn't fair. Don't make me throw an angry Wufei complaining about injustice at you. It's clear that you wanted to take this somewhere, so take it. We want to read it. Also, I found myself asking why Duo stopped slurring when he did.

. . . . . . bacardi is rum.

\"To Be Continued?\" ---- > YES!!! absolutely Yes!

Selenna *threesome whore*

I hope you get another chapter up and soon! xxx This is great. xxx

Great story, but Barcardi doesn\'t make vodka. Barcardi is rum.

That was really HOT!!!! I hope you\'d write a continuetion sooooooon, would there be any????

Yummy! Now, just continue on with Trowa in the mix and you\'ll have very happy readers!

I wouldn\'t mind reading about Trowa getting in on the action that rocked. Keep it up.

THE HELL YES!!!!!!!!!!!!
GIVE SOME 1X2 AND 3X2 YAOI ACTION!!!!!!!!!