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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked your story but there's just one thing...the word bowels should never be used in a sex scene.lol. other than that it was great
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"...their erotic hold. Heero looked deeply into Heero's eyes, not knowing what to make..." I believe you mean Heero looked deeply into Quatre's eyes. Also, at the end when they come, "extreme tightness." It's so fun to make the cute little blonde, the sweet one, the aggressor, ne?