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oh, that was terribly sad! Poor Roy! I loved the Riza/Schezka thing. it was quite funny but i thought the way Roy thought about Hughes, calling him names though he\'s dead and cursing him, was very roy-like. I find this fic well written and well done. I have to say though, the most impressive part of this fic so far has got to be the reality ridden way to described the morning woody. \"damn it, and now he couldn\'t go pee.\" that was hysterical, realistic and just a great line. bravo.

A good start! I hope you choose to continue with this story. I\'m curious to see where it leads!

I like it a lot! PLEASE continue, I really like your second chapter. I\'m really interested in where this is heading.