rate_review Reviews

Its pretty confusing in some point but mainly sine i swear if you blink you\'ll miss the sex scene. Its too short along with the rest of the story. And mention how big al is compared to ed(in penis size) otherwise its easy to get a bit lost during that part. Not much I can help you with you just need to keep trying harder.

Can\'t say much since its not much done yet. 2 things though 1 who is bigger since I\'m pretty sure ed practically stopped growing and Al lost the body of a little kid did Ed make him an adult one or what? Is he 6 foot? 3 foot? Did Ed grow at all? these are kinda important. Either way Al should be alot bigger uh \"in bed\". Its always more fun that way.

Me like a lot!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter!