rate_review Reviews

wow!...that is one GREAT story ...i love it!...write more! lol

did u write more? No,no, no, it cannot end like this. Okay, do like the othere reviewer says, do winter and spring. It dosen\'t matter, I love ur writing. This lemon is freakin hot. I need more. Do u uhnderstand???? PLEASE

Yay! I love this story and its counterpart! Just rawr baby. ^~

Since you have the running theme of \"seasons\" I think you should have winter and spring parts too! Think about it! Winter could be a little fun lemon (winter wonderland, snowball fights, chestnuts roasting over an open fire and whatnot) and the spring one could be about jealousy (springtime = hormones and someone else might be interested in Winry? After all everyone loves a possesive/jealous Edo! ^^).

Heh, but it\'s just a thought! ^^;

Anyway, I just wanted to express my adoration for your Ed/Winry lemons! They\'re the best out there! Truly kiddo.

Hope you at least consider continuing your Ed/Winry story, we need more of them!

Ja ne!

Moo-chan

..... I love you. :-D Seriously, you write some of the best EdxWinry PWP EVER! I read \'Summer Heat\' and sadly never got a chance to review it. I might go back and re-read it to review it later. But onto THIS story... Very hot, I have to say. And while Ed seems OOC to me in both stories, its not the bad OOC. I expect OOC from characters in fanfics because it generally places the character in situations never seen in the series. In this case, sex. Thus its very believeable to see Ed be all demanding and stuff during sex. In fact, I like that! So its good OOCness. I liked Winry, however, getting her revenge for \'Summer Heat\' as well. Nice to see her more dominate and responsive. *Nodnod* I enjoyed how you started the two stories as well and difference between them. A long intor with Ed and then, for this story, a long intro for Winry. Very nice. Your writing is superb, although you do tend to repeat a lot. However I enjoy how lengthy it is. This site desperate needs more awesome EdxWinry lemon fics from talented authors like you. GREAT job! Please write more! It would make me so happy! :-)

I love it! See your a real hardcore smut writer just like the rest of us...

Great one girl, you should try more of these cause you have it done pat now.

i am sweating. i swear, iu had to go take a drink between chapters 1 & 2 but i was so involved in the story that i spilled coke all down my back when i tried to take a sip. FABULOUS WORK. i swear, the whole thing is just genious. i may love you for this PWP. it\'s just too good, i am shivering!!!!!! i loved it!! The wording, descriptions, the passion, the characterization- everything was well done. Ed\'s hang up with words is insightful and sexy! (i love talking so this was just over-the-top great for me). PLEASE continue this arc of their learning experiences. i need more from you!!

Wow....just....wow....that\'s absolutely brilliant!! I admire your work!!
Please Keep up the great work and write a whole lot more soon.