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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the funniest stories i have ever read. It is funny, romantic, and erotic, without being discuting and distasteful. Nice work ^_^
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv ur fic!!!!! but i cant get to any of ur pics >:( please if u can email em to me!!!!! great fic!!!!!!!!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I really enjoyed your story. I was not, as I had expected, a simple "Oh, god, I need you, let's do the nasty now!" kinda thing. More than that. Really sensual, erotic, exciting, funny.
Winry's hot, and so is Ed. I thank you for making my day
-Hammerstroke
Winry's hot, and so is Ed. I thank you for making my day
-Hammerstroke
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo. Chapter three. *fans self*
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I laughed my ass off when winry was on eds lap and the whole crew walked in on them.
My husband thought i was insane the way i was laughing. This was only like the 2nd fma fic i read.
Too many roy/ed fics for me, so this was really nice to read.
i wish you would do a mustang hawkeye lemon. I love mustang!!!
funny thing is, my hubbys cousin auditioned for the part of mustang. I'm sad he didn't get it, but glad at the same time.
A gay guy doing mustangs voice, and the fact lthat i loooovvvee roy mustang, would just be too weird.
anywqays, it was great reading. humor and lemons... wonderful
My husband thought i was insane the way i was laughing. This was only like the 2nd fma fic i read.
Too many roy/ed fics for me, so this was really nice to read.
i wish you would do a mustang hawkeye lemon. I love mustang!!!
funny thing is, my hubbys cousin auditioned for the part of mustang. I'm sad he didn't get it, but glad at the same time.
A gay guy doing mustangs voice, and the fact lthat i loooovvvee roy mustang, would just be too weird.
anywqays, it was great reading. humor and lemons... wonderful
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI AGAIN! It's me The Reviewer formaly known as Tangei, my new name is Kourui ^_^ Witch means Tears of Blood, anyway, awsome job, I loved it, I knda feel sorry for Roy...Naaa! LOL AWSOME JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
*Kourui*
*Kourui*
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeaha awosme I loved it woot! Keep up the good work I can't get enough, I love the pics, I love a good Ed pic, though I would have liked it more if they wern't with his brother...that's a little to creepy for me ^_^ I love them anyways though awsome job write another FMA fic sometime and I'll be shore to read it, though the only parings I like and Roy & Riza and ED & Winry ok MATANE!
*Koruri*
*Koruri*
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...OH MY FREAKEN GOD THAT WAS AWSOME LOLI CAN'T STOP LAUGHING! My sister was staring at my like I wa nuts...I almost fell out of my computer chair awsome job WOOT!
*Tangei*
*Tangei*
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...AH HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE THATS CRULE!!! LOL OK this is officaly the best FMA story I have ever read awsome job WOOT!
*Tangei*
*Tangei*
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't know how the story read before the revision, but I certainly like it as is. I think that each chapter had its high points, and I would love to read more FMA work of your in the future. Your style is certainly fun to read. The only thing I have to complain about is the grammar/spelling. Still love the story, but I am too obsessive not to say anything about that. Get yourself a good editor and you are set. Thanks!