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by drake220

person LinkMasta
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOT! THAT ROCKED! Dont ever stop writing!
person donald
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you should do a follow up on it
person thebigW
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I'll vote for the continuation of the epilog (or you could even make it a complete stand-alone). Nasty things, those d/b glitches. I lost about 17 reviews across all of my fics, so I feel your pain. Love how you had Riza waver for a bit until he gave her the cue she'd been waiting for.

Wunnerful, wunnerful.

W.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I went to the site you said to find Inuyasha and Kagome's kids well I cant find it a blank screen apears and on the top it says a bunch of weird words do you know what I can do to see this pic...I know this is a old story to you and you probably wont be reading this but if you do can you tell me how to see the pic PLZ!!
person The Flaming Sword Alchemist
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh. You should extend Ed's POV.
person Iruka_Yuywell
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Merry F-ing Chirstmas! That was the hottist lemon I've read in quite awhile. And the talking didn't seem off to me. I was talked the same way through my first time, lol ^_^ way to go!
person aspiker
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has been the funniest and most fun read I've seen in a while. 8-) Thanks for sharing it with us.
person Cina
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so much fun- Thank so much for writing it!
person Alyson Metallium
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaay! I really enjoyed the lemon (I can see them fighting during sex, too. They're just like that. XD) and then this little addition capped it off. I love Winry's comment to Riza, and poor Roy, nearly stuck his foot in it again. ^^ YATTA!
person AJAngelique
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OW! That was perfect! Please write more!

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