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WE NEED A CHAPTER THREE!!!!!
You have GOT to finish this fic!!!!!!!!!!!! I want...no NEED to find out where this goes!!!
*licks her lips hungrily*

EIRICHICK (-.-)=~
aka
PIKACHU GODDESS (o\';\'o)

The first chapter was a nice, funny thing. You did great. I did not take the time to read the second chapter for two reason. I\'m a lazy girl, and although your story is interesting (and here begins the second reason) reading a chapter that is essencially the same as the previous one is... kind of a mood killer. A story must go foward and never go back (unless flashback scenes are a way for story development... I mean FMA is kind of builed that way, is it no?). But still, that is only my point of view. Besides, that doesn\'t mean I wont read the second chapter in a few months... But I\'m looking foward to a lemon!

Oooo, I really liked this! I liked seeing the two different points of view of the same scenario, and I\'d LOOOOOVE to see the next chapter. :-D Wonderful how a typical thing like automail maintance can turn so erotic so quickly. ^^ Nummy.

This was awsome!! I didn\'t think Winry was bitchy, just a tease and the part when Roy and the others walk in on them was really funny. I really liked it so please update soon I can\'t wait to read that lemon! ^-^

please put hawkeye and roy together in later chapters!!!!!

I really love this fic!, it´s so funny and it had to me laughing a lot ^^ , poor Ed, it wasn´t his lucky day at first time, but later it become better, OMG, you made him is SO ADORABLE! *^^* . I like how you made the two pov, it was so exciting to read!, you´ve a very good style to write ^^.
I can´t wait to read the next chapter!. I think you can do a lot of funny situations to do more chapters, but not in pov for other characters... Anyway, you must do lemon, lemon, LEMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON.
Please update soon! ^__________^
(Forgive my english, please, it´s my second language :<)

Wow, this story is really good! I wouldn\'t put Riza\'s POV in the next chapter though, since it would feel out of place. You can\'t leave your fans hanging on this last chapter. On with the lemon! LOL.

Raise your hand if you like lemons! ;;blushes;; I can\'t speak for anyone else but I love this story!! I vote for lemon in next chapter! But that\'s really up to you to decide. love it love it love it. keep up the good work

Do you think you could make the next one a lemon? And then maybe have Hawkeye take a hint from Winry\'s actions? Anyway, I loved your story, it\'s the first Fullmetal Alchemist story I\'ve read and I am so glad. It was great, you are a wonderful writer, please continue the story. Please?

I have to agree with your ending statement, the plot isn\'t strong enough for anymore character POVs. At least, not strong enough to make the POVs interesting. No offense, of course. I LOVE this story. I just think the way you left off chapter 2, there should be a nice lemon next. Makes sense. :-D Either way, I enjoyed this story very much! I liked Riza here a lot. Someone has to keep horny military men in line. :-D I look forward to chapter 3! Here\'s hoping Winry gets what she wants!