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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemon! Lemon lemon lemon!!!!!
That\'s my vote.
Yeah.
This is a cute story. I was a little bit...eh...about the chap. from Ed\'s POV but this one kind of made it work a little better. It turned out well, despite the fact you said it didn\'t.
That\'s my vote.
Yeah.
This is a cute story. I was a little bit...eh...about the chap. from Ed\'s POV but this one kind of made it work a little better. It turned out well, despite the fact you said it didn\'t.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I intend to take my payment in flesh. Literally.
Yes she does! I liked the change in POV but you\'re right, I don\'t think that you should do another chapter of just that because you\'re killing us with the UST! Good work!
Yes she does! I liked the change in POV but you\'re right, I don\'t think that you should do another chapter of just that because you\'re killing us with the UST! Good work!
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the first stories I\'ve actually laughed out loud in in a long time!
Rock on with your bad self!
Anywho, it\'s awsome, keep up the good work, and please update soon!
I\'ll keep an eye on this story, it makes me increadably happy!
Rock on with your bad self!
Anywho, it\'s awsome, keep up the good work, and please update soon!
I\'ll keep an eye on this story, it makes me increadably happy!
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for Winry\'s POV. What was she thinking? At first you had her clueless as to what she was doing to Ed, but by her last comments, she\'s become a contemptible cock-tease, and while she and Ed have a number of issues to work out, I don\'t think even he deserves that. If he\'s seventeen, by now I think he\'d be a bit more mature and let her know exactly what she was doing to him. You were right about one thing, Achilles wouldn\'t put up with that...
W.
W.
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost envy her...please post the next chapter soon; it\'s not every day that I can vicariously sit on Ed\'s lap...*sigh* ^_^
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! THIS IS HILLARIOUS!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bwahahhahaa....seventeen, eh? haha. is ed still a virgin? kekeke.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just about died laughing! Oh gods, I never felt so sorry for Ed-kun! Winry is pure evil...
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very funny i loved every bit of it keep writing more