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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, English is not ur mother language? but i didn't feel any different. hahaha. maybe it is because my mother language is not english, either.
Oh,by the way, i just checked the date of this story published, i haven't updated for almost 4 months. does it mean u are going to stop writing this story. if u do, it is killing me. Please, don't stop writing it. many people here will get killed if you stop.
Oh,by the way, i just checked the date of this story published, i haven't updated for almost 4 months. does it mean u are going to stop writing this story. if u do, it is killing me. Please, don't stop writing it. many people here will get killed if you stop.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow,so nice reading. i hope that u would continue on writing it. it is so glad that gohan's tail is back again. the reason that the back of his tail is very interesting. the idea is very ........attractive. please don't hold on writing. i want it to be written finishe.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are mirai/gohan going to pair up soon? this is a great story i hope u update soon
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another well done chapter!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I honestly don't see what you're talking about. Yes, Gohan is a tad submissive, but it's your story and I believe it works out well with the plot. I still like him immensely, maybe BECAUSE he's a bit more "human" and I can relate to his confusion and frustration.
And he HAS been through a lot, even enough that perhaps a Saiyan mind would struggle. Keep in mind, the unbreakable GOKU was out of it for days... I see Gohan's recent "weakness" as just a gathering of all the struggles he's been through. It seems as though maybe he isn't really coping as well as he wants to think he has been and it all just came crashing down around him as a result.
That's a lot of stress he carries around and I think in this chapter, more so than perhaps the last, he's being more honest about NOT having all the answers and NOT having everything around him in check.
I felt the confrontation with him and Mirai was necessary and done extremely well. Mirai is quite the enigma in this story yet I'm very drawn towards his character because we don't always see what he's thinking or planning and that makes his personality very unpredictable and intriguing. I honestly don't ever know what he's going to say or even what his intentions. And I enjoy that.
This story thusfar is in my mind, perfect really. It's very indepth and I think makes every reader question what they think they know about themselves. Gohan thought he had everything sexually understood about himself until that kiss. But I think the more he figures he has everything (including himself) under control, the more things prove him wrong.
It's just such an entertaining and interesting story. Very intense, very soulful and just.. excellent.
Camaro
And he HAS been through a lot, even enough that perhaps a Saiyan mind would struggle. Keep in mind, the unbreakable GOKU was out of it for days... I see Gohan's recent "weakness" as just a gathering of all the struggles he's been through. It seems as though maybe he isn't really coping as well as he wants to think he has been and it all just came crashing down around him as a result.
That's a lot of stress he carries around and I think in this chapter, more so than perhaps the last, he's being more honest about NOT having all the answers and NOT having everything around him in check.
I felt the confrontation with him and Mirai was necessary and done extremely well. Mirai is quite the enigma in this story yet I'm very drawn towards his character because we don't always see what he's thinking or planning and that makes his personality very unpredictable and intriguing. I honestly don't ever know what he's going to say or even what his intentions. And I enjoy that.
This story thusfar is in my mind, perfect really. It's very indepth and I think makes every reader question what they think they know about themselves. Gohan thought he had everything sexually understood about himself until that kiss. But I think the more he figures he has everything (including himself) under control, the more things prove him wrong.
It's just such an entertaining and interesting story. Very intense, very soulful and just.. excellent.
Camaro
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a wild discussion. I think Gohan will be more accepting now that he knows about his father.
I look forward to more.
I look forward to more.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter. I hope Goku warms up to Trunks soon. UPDATE SOON!!!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Gohan! oh well at least Goku and Trunks rescued him. But how are they going to explain Eraiva's rather violent death without getting into too much trouble?
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO TRUNKS!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story!! Please update more soon!
~Roya~
~Roya~