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by chayron

person Webtester01
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Interesting chapter. I hope they get the company back from those two.

Keep it up! :)
person FionaMc
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this, i can't wait till you update again. I love Darkfics
person Camaro
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far babe... very, graphic? Just wanted to stop by to blow you a kiss darling! Hope all is well... your writing certainly is! God Damn!

Let me know if you need anything!

Camaro
person Webtester01
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark. Descriptive. Deep.

This story well portays the feelings and surroundngs of its characers. Also the bit of humor you weave in is very tasteful.

Keep it up.
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Trunks is tired. Is there gonna be any villians?! UPDATE SOON!!!
person Webtester01
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive. And dark! Please keep going on this. I like it.

Things will turn out better.. or will thay? *maniacle laugher*

Remember.....watch out for the corners! *grin*
person ~anz~
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~Intriguing!~
person Serepentine
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I\'m really liking it. I hope you continue soon ^_^
person vicki
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY I WOULD LOVE FOR YOU TO JOIN ARE GROUP AND POST YOUR STORY http://groups.yahoo.com/group/GohanxTrunks/ HOPE TO SEE U THERE
person madamdragon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tight! More. update soon!

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