rate_review Reviews

Good luck with the college classes (esp. math). Loved the beginning and would love to see where you go with this. Demons...interesting.

I don't know if anyones told you this yet but the movie takes plack in the time in between WW1 and WWII.

We know its after WWI becaus real world alphose mentions the treaty of Verseii. A treaty sighned in the after math of the first world war. Hitler isn't in power eiether yet, it's only after he seizes the govment that war breaks out again.

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Anyways I like your story. the charaters are beleiveable and so's the Ed/roy romance.

Please keep going!
P.S. You might want to consider moving this to the Yaoi section.

Hey, this is pretty cool. Despite it being yaoi (nothing against it, I just can't SEE Roy/Ed pairings! ) you've kept them in character. Hope to see more of it soon.

This is a really, well written/thought out FFict. Please keep going. I detest getting hooked on a particular FFict only for it to be canceled. But this particular one, is just... wow. Awaiting your next chapter!!

After many false starts and AFF connection problems I finally was able to reread your story. It's great! To think sweet, innocent Al is the more feared Elric...Almost as feared as Hawkeye and her handguns...XD. I like how you went from kiss at the door to the next morning. It seemed to fit with Ed's infatuation (and long standing crush) on Roy. It felt right.

I hope you do keep writing this story. 8-)

Well, as I write this, I've only finished through chapter 5, but I must say that I'm really enjoying this so far. The only point I'd like to make at this point, (and someone else may have already said this, since I've yet to read the other reviews) is that in both the series and the movie, the events in our world take place in WWI and afterward, not WWII. I believe the series events take place in 1925, and I know for a fact the movie events take place in 1927, based on what is known today as the Beer Hall Putsch, where Hitler attempted a coup d' etat and failed on November 8, 1927. That's a good 10+ years before the events of WWII. It's not a criticism, since I totally understand your point about AUs, and if anything, you could say that Ed was dropped not only to another world, but another time. (Still.. I think the middle of the chapter might not have been the best place to make such a note ;) )

.. Now back to reading, and I'll give a more complete review when I'm finsihed-- but I'm really enjoying what you've written so far.

Hi, I just started reading this (new to the fandom) and I absolutly LOVE it! Please update soon!

The first 3 chapters have me hooked. You have good solid writing skills. Entertaining story!

Excellant story! 2 thumbs up! A lemon would be nice. Looking forward to the next update.