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I like this story!
It\'s wonderfully written and detailed. Please update soon!

i\'M really liking this so far, drags you into the story line, cant wait to read more =)

Going well.
I agree that if Roy and Ed moved too fast on each other then the story would sink down with a multitude of other short lived/loved fics in the depths of smutland (Not like I don\'t enjoy them however).
But I can tell i\'ll be checking for updates regularly on this one, it\'s just so well written, in terms of minimal OOCness and good plot development.
However, your not without your faults (no one is) no matter how small they are.
You really should commit yourself to checking each chapter before you post it and I don\'t mean just running it through a spell check you need to read over each new part to make sure it makes sense.
I came across a very amusing mistake that indicates quite obviously that your not giving this story the attention it needs to become almost perfect.
\"Mustang had raised his hand to silence Fullmental\'s questions until Al was finished\"
It\'s a cute mistake, just don\'t let them get anyworse than that.
I\'m eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

OMFG CUTENESS!! ed is back whieej.. en it was teh first world war btw. though I like it how you explained everything and yaaaoooi mustang puked *jukies* anyways keep up the goodwork (knows she\'s ranting)

Ah, so short! Please, another chapter soon? By the way, happy anniversary of the day of your birth; may the angels dance and cherubim throw garlands for this joyous occasion. I hope that you share a great many more birthdays with good friends, loving family, and a pint of Neopolitan Ben & Jerry\'s.

This is really well written...
The first half chapters set a nice pace for the story line, although it gets a little slow later on, but it\'s all good.
A skillful way to smooth out any OOCness (which is barely noticeable).
I particularly enjoyed the argument Roy and Ed have in his dorm.
You make a few miniscule spelling mistakes, a wrong letter here and there, but they\'re easily overlooked.
On the whole well done.
I look forward to seeing this story continued and am eagerly awaiting a sweet scene between roy and Ed.

I meant that you didn\'t have to give thanks for reviews; your posting more chapters is really thanks enough. As long as I can provide some oil to the creative machine...I understand what you said about multifaceted characters. I always start off with a story plot that seems so straightforward, and then one of my characters ends up pitching a fit or being killed off in a frustrated rage lol. No matter how much I want A to lead eventually to Z, I\'ve learned that truly good characters will always change their destinies. I\'m thankful that there are writers who know and respect that, instead of there just being people who plop a character in the middle of the ocean and expect them to swim to safety. Sometimes (unfortunately) they drown, sometimes they see if they can find a floatation device, sometimes they realize they belong there, but rarely do they every do what you want and JUST FREAKING SWIM. So we adapt, and they adapt, and we all end up better for it. Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.

Oh my god!
Please update soon!
This is a really good story, keep up the good work.
Can\'t wait to see Al and their \"date\".
Email me sometime.(look above)
How many chapters is it going to have?
What is the plot, or is it just a roy & ed love fic?

hiya I couldnt review on FF.net because you enabled the no anonymouse reviews and I dont have an account there, so thought I would review here, first off, totally love your fic so far, have been reading since chap one but again have yet to review it me thinks, which is sad and I am sorry for that, anyhow the last chapter was great, I loved the way Ed just totally blew away all reasons why Roy should continue to suffer in quilt, and how Roy thought how having Ed back was a kick in the pants for all of them, he brings life back into an other wise dull sort of existance for them all, yes they might have the military and all, but Ed brings laughter and trouble and fun into thier lives, love the way he just showed up and took over while Roy slept and suprised the crap outta Riza and how she hugged him, and then Roy having heard a familiar voice but thought he was dreaming till he heard Riza talking and had to look and stood stunned in the doorway..that was totally priceless, and how the dull look left his eye and that old smirk and spark of life returned at the prospect of his duels with FullMetal, which he had missed for six long years, cant wait to see Al reaction and how he will cope with a brother he doesnt even know anymore, ooh please update soon, cant wait to read more, thank you for tha terrific read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

The dairy farm report was cute. 8-) The way in which you\'ve shown the optimism and maturity of Ed was very well done.