rate_review Reviews

I liked it a lot-I think The story, Is well put together, And doesnt overstep any sort of Bounds when it comes to the whole \"Mass Amount of Purple Prose\" deal.Its Vauge enough to keep me reading, detailed enough for me to always know whats going on. Plus. <3 Fma.

first off *hugs* great fanfic n.n please update as soon as you can

............. oh holy shit in a handbasket that was good....... I just love how despite the fact that you didn\'t really describe the sights and experiences from the war I could still see them in my head. I so want to read more of this story, It\'s just really great.

And on a side note, your spelling and stuff is really good, it\'s just your punctuation that needs some work.

Update soon!

man i am loving this. keep up the good work

I\'m not usually a fan of Ed/Roy fics, but you hooked me with the \'alternate world-war\' thing. I hope you update soon, because I can\'t wait to read more.On a technical note, your grammar and punctuation are very good, and this is the first time I can remember a really good story not being interrupted by by a mistake or tense change. I\'m almost sad to say I read right through...please post more soon!

Your story is fun to read. Ed\'s plan of getting his forms and getting them \"signed\" were a good chuckle. 8-) I\'m looking forward to reading more of your character\'s adventures...

Don\'t thank me for the review; I was glad to write it. No glaringly obvious mistakes in this chapter either, and thank you for being so prompt with it. It\'s nice to know that *some* people who ask so nicely for reviews read them and respond ^_^. I haven\'t seen every episode of FMA, or the movie, but from what I\'ve seen, it would be so easy for Ed to become jaded or disillusioned by some of the things he\'s seen or had done to him. His unfailing optimism is kind of out of place, but that makes it interesting. Your fic keeps him true to character when you could go so far into left field...good job, and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

huzzah! poor Mustang thinks he\'s loosing his mind xP that was very cute, please continue! ^____^ (sneaky little Edo >< )

i am so loving this. please update soon

omg, what happens next, what happens next. c\'mon tell meeeeeee. please update soon, your killing me here.