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by VelvetMace

person listersgirl
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous fic. I love how you keep Roy and Edward in character! Some of the lines just kill me too. As a result I did an illustration for it and I'm going to post it right now on AdultFanFictionArtists. http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionArtists/
person Vanessa
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it very much :)
I think you should make a sequel, i like the personalites you gave them
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person Sevlow
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazingly in-character. It\'s a rare find to read an unconventional love pairing and still have them both in character, awesome job. Kinda sad toward the end, but still absolutely DELICIOUS! Not to mention that I was giggling maniacly the whole time. Keep it up.
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Well I\'m not entirely sure what to say about that one. I did really like that it was in the first person, though. That\'s unusual. Ed was very in character - it made for an overall very different perspective. I liked it.
person Moshi Moshi Mai
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL~

I loved it. It was hilarious x)
person Mikadzuki-hime
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just like your other one-shot fics this one was just as fantastic. I look forward to reading more of your works. Please continue to write you really do have the best one-shots out there. Arigatou Ja ne!
person mayfaire
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot but what was hotter and funnier was the way ed describes their ehem session its so hilarious!I LOVE IT!you perfectly got ed\'s character verrrrrryyy nice. more i should say!
person zula
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking perfect... :)
person lstdpnthght
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was good. I loved how you kept the two of them in character so well. Good job!
person RealRoyMustang
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome and Mustang IS a bastard (that is what Ed loves about him but is scared to admit it!) GOOD STORY!!!!!

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