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OOOOHHHHHHH!ok when are u putting out more? I really wanna see another chapter! chop! chop! *giggles* I was a little confused about why quatra was still with him, letting the guy beat him and then buying that Ill kill your friends thing when eryone knows damn good and well you gotta be suicidal to try and kill our boys. So Im chalking all this behaviour up to battered wifes syndum. It dosent matter how strong and capable he was before, he started having feelings for rick and then when rick started going all abusive quatra started bekiving him and beliving that rick was capable of hurting his friends.....who would have killed rick as soon as the bastard tried anything.......so yeah theres my in the head reasoning for why lovable little Quatra didnt kick his ass the first time he was hit.......But anyway did I tell you I wanted more story? yes? no? but seriusly this is an awsome story and you write well! Keep up the good work. By and By if its reviews yer waiting for I\'ll just keep reviewing if it means we get another chapter! *blinks relises she just wrote a novel and quietly backs out of the review*

AWWWWWWWW. THEYR CUTE....CAN YOU UPDATE PLLLEEEEEEEAAAZZZZZ? C\'MON I WANNA SEE THE Bastard that hurt cat all dead. *giggles* seeing heero and quatra together and happy would be a plus to. look foward to more story!c :)

I like this this far. hope you update soon.

it\'s a sweet story...a little on the short side, but that\'s not really such a bad thing. I simply adore heero and quatre as a couple...it\'s just too cute ^^

aww too short, I hope that heero heals qchan TT

hey i love the fic! PPPPPPPLLLLLLZZZZZZZ write more!

A Good start. Would like to see more of this story.

yeah new chappie please!!

Well, it is a good idea. You went kind of fast, and you should explain why this guy was able to do these things to Quatre, he is an ex-gundam pilot, therefore very able to defend himself. He would also know that the others could defend themselves too. I am not being critical, just trying to be helpful, I would like to see this play out, it is not often you find this pairing. Slow down and put in more detail, and I think you have a good fic coming.