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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a pleasant surprise in the first chapter. Goku is such a sly devil in this story...I love it! It can't possibly end at chapter 9. I hope to read more from you. :)
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I was TOTALLY dumbstrucked!! OMG I just read the first chapter and it was awesome!! I didn't realize it was Goku until she said it! Way to go, girl! I will read the other chapters now... Holy crap that was good!! See ya! =)
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my :D that's hot.
Goku <3
Goku <3
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drools* Nice.... very nice. I even liked the yaoi scene and I'm not into yaoi!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pleeeease tell me this is still going on!! this has to be one of the BEST dbz lemons i've ever read. since i don't really check this site so much, much less the dbz section, can you possibly send an email when you update? would be very much appreciated!
looking forward to the next chapter!!
looking forward to the next chapter!!
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. It'd be cool if you expanded on the Bulma/Vegeta thing. That seemed interesting.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy sh-t! SOrry about that...That is an ultimate thing for me!!!! my god she didnt! Damn I have a whole new vision of Gohan.... omg!
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was such a pile of Bullshit. Gohan could of at least raped that slut, broken a few bones, rip her hair out, while fisting her or something. Slut deserves it.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Goku is hot! Videl is so lucky. Was she really that shocked? I don't think so, how could she not know? Well, I didn't know so I suppose I can see. You really caught me off guard. I thought it was Gohan too but Goku... Wow. This was beautiful. She's addicted, end of story! Will Gohan ever be as good as his father? Goku was always better than him at everything even macking his girl! Ha!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this the end? I love this story!