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Woah! Aggressive and possessive Gohan is always an interesting spin on his usually placid personality. I could really feel the danger in the air about him when he was re-staking his claim on Videl. Yeah, it is sad though that he couldn't be passionate about their sex without the jealousy goading him. It was nice to see him and Videl chumming around and having fun as lovers-- it seems like they have a good chance of patching things up and working it out.

Oh my dear kami! Goku?!!! That was ingenious!!! Man that was hot.

fucking awsome... loved the side story in the GR

I certainly was surprised by the inital twist! I dutifully kept reading and I must say it is going great! I really like how you keep it at a lust only affair. You can read the naughty parts ::fans herself:: while not getting your heart broken. Not that there isn't drama related to it (and that is being handled quite well) but it's not so consuming that you can't pay attention to the good parts! Please, please! Keep up with the writing! I get together with a group of friends and we share stories that we've either read (with proper credit given) or written ourselves. I've shared a few that I've seen here, and this will definately be added to that list! We shall be biting our nails waiting for the next chapter!

Holy shit* damn that was hot, i love the way gohan behaved here. i was hoping that there would be a threesome with videl goku and gohan, but as i read this it won't happen. great chapter!!

I want channel 16... Chichi and Bulma certainly seemed to be enjoying themselves.^^ Who can blame them? It's fun to see the wives ok with G and V being together, even getting off on it as well. So the big Gohan/Videl discussion is next, that should be interesting. Gohan will probably be even more pissed at his father when he finds out that it was originally his idea, and Videl didn't know what was happening at first. But Videl wouldn't have had to go back to him, so it was her fault as well. Hopefully Gohan will get over it fast and get started on his own corruption, hehheh.

You evil, evil woman! How could you give us part of the goings on and not let us peek!? *nosebleed* Do you know how erotic that was? Gods, girl! You keep this up and I'll die happy with my own imaginings of just exactly was going on and just how Goku was getting those amazing sounds to come from the ever icy cold Vegeta.

Wonderful! MORE SOON DAMNIT!

LOVE!

V.M.

Lol, Vegeta is so wonderfully evilly manipulative of Gohan in this one. Well, he needs it.^^ So Gotenks was hitting on him! I wonder if Goten and Trunks are both as openly lusty as their fathers or if they only have the nerve to be that way as the cocky (oops, made a pun) fusion. Looking forward to more!

*dies of nosebleed*

TEASE! *grumbles* I see how you are; getting us all revved up for A Goh/Veg lemon and you had to give Vegeta a fucking concious. Then, you get us geared up for a Vegeta/Goku lemon only to leave us wanting for more. You're lucky that I love you, or else I'd make you wait for me to molest you until you give us yummy lemons!

*tackles her to the ground and molests her* XD

Here at last!

That was one of your best chapters written to date. I love this. Gohan was scarily pissed, Videl was believeably terrified, Goku was, as always, delightfully clueless, and Chichi was frighteningly calm.

I admit that I was floored by Chichi and Bulma's plans to get Vegeta and Goku together. It was such a Bulma thing to do but Chichi agreeing to it? O.o;

Much love to your muse; may it burn brightly with hantai for the next thousand years!

*glomps*

LOVE!

V.M.