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update update update update update update update so good!

I have to say that I am greatly pleased with this story. The pacing and how you handle the characters really make this an enjoyable piece. The sex scenes are tastfully done and thankfully not over done. Hope to see more from you!

O_O Oops! Vegeta-chan is going to make things difficult, I just know it. He always seems to walk in at the wrong moment...is that just his timing or is it that he's just that damn sneeky? Anyway I love this chapter, flows well, smooth transition from "day of the 'spar'" to weeks later, and (you know me) Vegeta's timing was absolutely the perfect backdrop to either a helluva lot of angst or some princly blackmail...only part b will tell the tale.


~tacklehuggleglomps!~


V.M. : ~happy dance~
Videl : @_@ I am so dead!
Vegeta : ~dances~ I got dirt on Kakarott!
Goku : ~looks around~ Where? I don't see dirt.
V.M., Videl, Vegeta : ~facevault~

Thank you, person who told Pix to tell you to write more! *content sigh* Ahhh.... updates. Interesting philosopy on relationships and sex that Goku has. LOL I am wondering if Chichi already knows he looks for sex elsewhere (since she’s not up for it anymore and he says he still loves her like no other). I feel sorry for Gohan being cuckolded... but the GkVi sex is so hot!! Shame on me. X3 The part that really stood out for me, and the part I liked best, was in the lemon where Goku loosened his grip on her hair when he saw it was starting to hurt her. It was such a nice little touch that shows that even though the sex is rough, he’s still concerned for her well-being and enjoyment. More please?

That was simply HOT!!!

*Drools*

You certainly need to update this. Do it! Do it now, I say!

I think I need to go back and re-read. You really have a way with words.

Well done!

I've been waiting for a finfic like this. Please keep writing!

bad bad bad
Well not like you think
A sob? Poor Vegeta he must be wanting something??
HMMMM
Are we going to see XXX?
Good chapt , I see now it will continue...
thank you!

O____O EEEEK!!!! Whats HE doing there??? Oh man I wonder what Vegeta is gonna do....*cough*threeway*cough* >_> Anyway, nice, hot lemon!!! Im fanning myself. ACK!!! MORE!!!!!

Oh, this is going to be good, Vegeta in the picture now, Please , please you gotta write this. igotta know what Vegeta's reaction is.

*BLOWS* HOT HOT HOT DAMN THAT WAS HOT. THANK YOU PIX'S *kisses*. please keep writing more chapters. I can't wait to read how vegeta feel or sees about this Hmmmmm. maybe he might want to get on the action ^_^

UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!