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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shakes fist* Damn you for making me read DBZ het!
Your Goku is *wonderful*, and his reason for cheating on his wife are pretty IC, I think.
Also, more Vejiita is always a good thing, no matter how he might complicate things. ^_^
Your Goku is *wonderful*, and his reason for cheating on his wife are pretty IC, I think.
Also, more Vejiita is always a good thing, no matter how he might complicate things. ^_^
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forgot about this one too damn!! it is on my recommeded list!!! I search for these Not too many Gokua and Videl pairings!! This is so wicked just like
Goku should be....Haha!! Great Job thank you for making me hot for Goku !!!
Goku should be....Haha!! Great Job thank you for making me hot for Goku !!!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gasp! A second chapter! Why the heck does this story only have two stars? Probably the fault of a disgruntled Gohan/Videl fan. I\'ll fix that (now that I know how the star rating thingie works *sweatdrop*). I wasn\'t expecting a continuation, but I\'m glad you\'re giving it a try and I look forward to seeing what you\'ll do with this tasty story. It was nice to have Videl\'s thoughts and emotions on what happened to her, how a forbidden part of her hoped it would happen again yet she didn\'t want to lose her marriage and family over it. I liked how you gave us a little picture of day-to-day Son life out in the woods, and Goku\'s methods of earning money were perfect for him. Another steamy hot lemon, yet strangely enough I think my favorite part was the image of shirtless sweaty Goku chopping wood *Homer Simpson-esque droooool*
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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V.M.: O_O; HELL FUCKING YEAH! This was so awesome! I totally love this. ~grins~ Looks like the muse is working in my favor, chappy two of this delectable little fic outshinned chappy one. ~does the cabbagepatch~ Go Macha, it\'s your birthday! Go Macha! ^_^
Love ya
V.M.
Macha: And the award for the best discriptive comment to a post goes to Vegeta\'s Mate. For almost making me spit out my coffee.
Thank\'s VM. I am glad you liked it. You thought this was better than chapter 1 huh? Hmm... see, I thought chapter 1 was better, but tells you what I know. hehe
Macha
V.M.: ~Takes a bow and wipes tears from her eyes~ I want to thank everyone who helped me on my way to becoming the best in the descriptive comment genre... lol!
I seem to have that effect on people...ThePrincesJewel seems to think I am a bit of a hoot when I am in the right mood...which is most of the time!
Thanks for writing such a great edition!
~tacklehuggleglomps!~
V.M.
~end jl post~
P.S. I hope you don\'t mind me posting this here...it was too funny not to share. I love this fic and you, of course, for writing it!
V.M.: O_O; HELL FUCKING YEAH! This was so awesome! I totally love this. ~grins~ Looks like the muse is working in my favor, chappy two of this delectable little fic outshinned chappy one. ~does the cabbagepatch~ Go Macha, it\'s your birthday! Go Macha! ^_^
Love ya
V.M.
Macha: And the award for the best discriptive comment to a post goes to Vegeta\'s Mate. For almost making me spit out my coffee.
Thank\'s VM. I am glad you liked it. You thought this was better than chapter 1 huh? Hmm... see, I thought chapter 1 was better, but tells you what I know. hehe
Macha
V.M.: ~Takes a bow and wipes tears from her eyes~ I want to thank everyone who helped me on my way to becoming the best in the descriptive comment genre... lol!
I seem to have that effect on people...ThePrincesJewel seems to think I am a bit of a hoot when I am in the right mood...which is most of the time!
Thanks for writing such a great edition!
~tacklehuggleglomps!~
V.M.
~end jl post~
P.S. I hope you don\'t mind me posting this here...it was too funny not to share. I love this fic and you, of course, for writing it!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that...great couple. Unusual pairing. Write more, please!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes everyone\'s right you HAVE TO CONTINUE WITH THIS YOU HEAR ME!!!
\"It\'s not nice to tease the animals with such great G/V lemons... They tend to turn savage if you don\'t keep on writting....\" ^____^
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD GOKU\'S POV TOO!! How long has he been obsessed with Videl? WHY is he obsessed with her? What\'s wrong with his and Chichi\'s relationship? Was the first time premeditated or was it thought out of the blue? Was Goku planning from the beginning on letting Videl know it was him al the time and not Gohan, or was it just something he decided on at the end of the sex? How is he so sure she won\'t tell Chichi or his son? Isn\'t he afraid of Pan finding out? Does he have any special hidden feelings for Videl or is he in just for the forbidden wild sex? Is Videl his first mistress ever or has he had others before? (like, perhaps, Bulma?)
Does Vegeta know or suspect anything about Goku being attracted towards his daughter-in-law, or is Videl the first and only one to ever have become aware of it? And WHERE is Goten?
Ohh so many questions... You have to add a third chapter with Goku\'s POV, PLEASE!!
\"It\'s not nice to tease the animals with such great G/V lemons... They tend to turn savage if you don\'t keep on writting....\" ^____^
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD GOKU\'S POV TOO!! How long has he been obsessed with Videl? WHY is he obsessed with her? What\'s wrong with his and Chichi\'s relationship? Was the first time premeditated or was it thought out of the blue? Was Goku planning from the beginning on letting Videl know it was him al the time and not Gohan, or was it just something he decided on at the end of the sex? How is he so sure she won\'t tell Chichi or his son? Isn\'t he afraid of Pan finding out? Does he have any special hidden feelings for Videl or is he in just for the forbidden wild sex? Is Videl his first mistress ever or has he had others before? (like, perhaps, Bulma?)
Does Vegeta know or suspect anything about Goku being attracted towards his daughter-in-law, or is Videl the first and only one to ever have become aware of it? And WHERE is Goten?
Ohh so many questions... You have to add a third chapter with Goku\'s POV, PLEASE!!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! *lets out a big breath* That was super super awesome! I\'m so glad you did another chapter!! I love the way you portray Goku (he\'s so hot in this...*swoon*) Thanks for making my day! OOH and, if your muses permit, ANOTHER! MORE!!! NOW!!! *begs and pleads*
Keep up the fantastic work! (makes me so jealous! lmao!)
Hellagoddess
Keep up the fantastic work! (makes me so jealous! lmao!)
Hellagoddess
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drool* Forceful Goku...yeeeeaaaahhhhhh *fans* Very nice! Im going to have nice dreams because of this and I thank you. XDDDDD
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didnt know there was a second chappie to this! Thanks again! *drools some more* Wow!! Now Im wondering why hes behaving this way. More please! XD
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG yes THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING ANOTHER CHAPTER. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. PIX PLEASE TELL HER TO WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS STORY. :)
I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. Just to read how Goku is like a animal is a real turn on. GREAT CHAPTER AGAIN *CLAPS* (but i want more)
I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. Just to read how Goku is like a animal is a real turn on. GREAT CHAPTER AGAIN *CLAPS* (but i want more)