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by Robyn

person Ginia
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a surprise... and hot as hell. I certainly hope there will be more of this?
person smokie
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh i thought it was vegeta you should have one with her trunks and goten
person Bura-chan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rarely read this couple--but I have before. But wow, that was so intense, erotic, and seductive--not to mention kinky! ^_~ I loved it! Great job!

Bura-chan
person Noel
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAWD--DAHM That was awesome totally didn\'t expect that. WTG GIRLY
person Billy Hillneck
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She read it out loud to me and said I had to write this to you. That made me hotter than a jellyfish in the middle of the desert.
person Vegeta\'s Mate
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEE!!!!!!!!!!! Almost as soon as I started to read this I knew it had to be Goku, Gohan is just too tame to think he can tie up his wife and get away with it. :D That was great! I loved it! ~holds out an empty plate~ MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!.

Love ya!

V.M.
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT was AWESOME. Ahhhhh!!! XD Totally freaking awesome. I don’t know why, but I just had a little voice in my head that told me it might be “that” pairing, that made me click on a fic that appeared to be a pairing I usually never read– I’m so glad I listened to it. Maybe it was wishful thinking, because I do like “that” pairing. I even had a plot bunny somewhat similar to this type of story! (Similar just in the basics) Fantastic lemon, delicious sexual imagery– best het fic I’ve read in quite a while.
person Hellagoddess
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again! I MUST say that this is one of my favorite het fics...(and that\'s saying something since i normally hate it lmao!) - Can you please delete my other review? I wasn\'t even thinking when i wrote it and i don\'t want to give the \'surprise\' away...*complete and utter guilt*

Thanks and this is awesome *shakes your hand furiously*

Hellagoddess
person jaygoose
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*huge grin* Damn you for making me read het! XD But it was sooooo good. I messed up and read the reviews before I read the fic and found out the surprise but I still liked how you pulled it off. I love the pairing too, makes it more interesting.
person Jay FicLover
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There aren\'t many fic out there with this pairing. I just love them together!

He\'s so hot and better for her, and she\'s so much prettier and nicer than that annoying older woman that is with him.

Oh, please PLEASE write more chapters! I wanna know how their relationship will be from now on, and may be a POV of him thinking about how he\'s been obsessed with her and what made him take the chance and do this... act so unlike the way everyone sees him.

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