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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ed, what a horribly unpleasent dream to wake up from. :P
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEK! Guttony ate Winry! That\'s so awesome, and so unexpected. She couldn\'t even enjoy her orgasm...awww. A couple of spelling mistakes and the Winery comes from when you spell check and not add \'Winry\' to the dictonary. It happens all the time, so don\'t even contemplate feeling dumb about that. Its a common mistake. Anyway the story was good, but I was sad when Winry really didn\'t get eaten. ^-^
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I tell you what this is a very unusual pairing starting with its not yaoi LOL. The lemon was well written but the ending totally freaked me out. GAGH! But I liked this it was a moving piece and you stired quite a bit of emotions from me which is a mark of a good word smith. Congrats but I\'m still missing Winry:( But I would be interested in if you did a series of \'sins\' with her, whether or not you wanted them all to be snuff endings is up to you. But you do the dark side well:)