AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for A Weekend in the Closet

by butterflyishida

person evilchild (not signed in)
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 wasn't posted... I really want to read it!
person Virpi
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! ^_^ Please update soon!
person TaiyChan
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, ha. Great job, liked the last line! Update soon, ok?
person Blackrose
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I love this story. It\'s soooo good. Keep it up. Loved it when Tala and Kai came outta the bathroom naked. Update soon please please please.
person Virpi
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOORRREEEEEE!!! I just want to read more, so are you taking the hint? UPDATE!
person Crystal Rose
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there my little friend! ^-^ This chapter was funny! I can\'t wait to read some more BryxRei action though! =) They are soooooooo cute! Please update again SOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN! Bye for now! =^-^=
person Liah
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA moths! id probably act like Mariah... i may jump if they fly past cos they\'re pretty quick but i dont really care that much really... tee hee! Anyway i wish we could\'ve heard more about the convo on randy team captains bet that would\'ve been interesting! lol
update soon plz!
Liah xx
person studio
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
writer\'s block sucks arse. Go give it a kick in the butt - twice. One for you and one for me. I don\'t have it right now, but I still haven\'t had my revenge for past experiences.

Well... I\'ll admit I liked the title of the chapter. Reminded me of one of my favourite poems actually. What?? No fluff at all in that chapter!? Ah well, there was enough in the two before it to make up for it.

I\'m sorry but I am really much too lazy for a long review right now. I may come back later and write another one, or maybe you\'ll just have to wait until the next chapter.

~studio

ps. It was a good chapter and you\'re doing really well!
person TaiyChan
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another update! Great job, the girls in this chap were hilarious. Me and my friends would probably react the same.

Update soon, ok?

And take a huuuuuge hammer and smash that writer\'s block into pieces!!! Or you can use your hand if you know karate XD

Update soon!!!!!
person Blackrose
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love this story. You\'re right as well. There\'s practically no Yuri. Hope to see some in this story. Update soon. Love it.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?