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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sad an sweet.(tears fall from eyes)It made me cry;)
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was good.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did an Excellent job with the angst. It was very sad, but I am glad that even though Goku wasn\'t able to say those last words, Chichi was able to read what his thoughts had been.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was beautiful. I was crying when I read the latter half of it and think that you captured Goku perfectly. Bravo!