rate_review Reviews

Awesome start to what seems to be a very promesing fic, indeed. I really like it so far! The plot is great and so is the portrayal of the characters, and the fic is also very well written. The smut was more than great, I loved it, hehe!

So Ed fainted, huh, cool, please write more, cos I want to read more and if so update ASAP, bitte...?!

And keep up the good work!

DUDE!!! You updated! YES! I love this chapter! ^_^ I like the growing relationship you\'ve started between Al and Fletcher, you gotta try and keep Al shy or it might go to pot. sorry >.<
But thanks for the e-mail too dude! I can\'t wait for the next chapter, any chance of an e-mail alert about that one too? *big cheeky grin* ^_^
Later dude, PLEASE start writing after you\'ve read this -thats if your a lazy writer and wait for reviews first. hehe.. *anglic look*]
LB XX

this is the fullmetal fic i\'ve read and i like it

OMG you have got to update, please im begging you. I love these kinds of pairings so you have got to update A.S.A.P.

there had SO better be another chapter! E-mail me, and I\'ll read and review that one too! PLEASE put up another chapter, I want to see what\'s changed! The ending of FMA and the movie was so NOT what I wanted!! *sighs and hugs Ed plushie* ^_^ feel better! so.... you going to up date?
e-mail me!
LB x

This is quite an excellent story. the plot is good, the compotitions is well done, deffenently something to keep doing.

ED\'s love dead? NNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Pleace tell me that that guy was wrong and he just wasn\'t sure whether or not he could trust them.
But besides that you have a good story here. Definently something to continue.

Oooooooo! Now what?! I am on pins and needles here!!